First words, last words

First words, last words

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Words can have great power. False words can brake a heart forever. Word of true love can make us desire the moon and the stars.

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                          First words, last words


Words can be  powerful tools.
Can awake the fearful and dead in heart.


Sweet love, eternal love.
Tender love make me dream and yearn for the kind embrace.
Sweet fragrant of love. Let me dwell in the sweetness of sweet kiss.
Allow me to to know the tranquil place where lovers know true pleasure
and paradise.

Allow the Wintry moon to cover up our secret places.
Where fiery desire can be hidden away from unknowing eyes.

First words, last words need to be sweet and tender.
Kind lovers pray for the night to expand to forever.
Deeper and deeper lovers fall.
The surging emotion take away regret and fear.

Real lovers do not confess the passionate nights and days.
Beloved places need to be protected and safe.

The color of love is bright and powerful.
In the paleness of the light of the new day.
Lovers whisper enchanting words and hold tighter.

Lasting love and emotion is envies.
Divine places where love is born and grow.
Need to be held safe and protected.

Blushing lovers doing the lover's dance.
Scarce places opening up.
Allowing love to bloom and expand.

Love cannot be hidden.
When love is alive and well.

The planned rendezvous bring hope and joy to the
waiting lovers.

                                    Coyote



© 2014 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
Just using words and thoughts. Thank you for reading.

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Whenl love lasts through the years, it is divine...no doubt about it. When love is real, it does not hide....it dances through the town square in the sunshine...and in the rain. It rejoices and sings. Indeed, words need to be soft and tender if the love is to last. Your words are wise and the imagery is so pretty. I enjoyed this one, Coyote. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

Thank you Lydia for your kind words. I needed a poem of love today. I'm glad you enjoyed.



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You describe the power and effect of words perfectly here. But without actions to support the words, words still can harm. I like the dramatic opening followed by a gentler tone as love is considered and "scarce places open up". Nice writing :) JJ

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment. Distance from love make the pain less painful.
I have always liked your words and again I thoroughly enjoyed this. You write with deep emotions and it touches the heart.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sukriti for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.
Love is a word and the only word that has got endless definition.

The most appreciative among them which I fell is 'A true love is the one who is capable of showing you the real you'. Which is done with much respect positively.

A person in love has a link through which he/she travels their entire life. They talk through that link, they live with that link, they sleep with that link.

They are engulfed in one another.

I felt light after reading this work of yours.

Thanks for sharing.

Stay blessed
Prodical


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words. We need to write of the joy of love sometimes.
prodicallife

10 Years Ago

That is so true. At times it happens, when you write some of your experiences, you certainly discove.. read more
This is lovely...

The color of love is bright and powerful.
In the paleness of the light of the new day.

I love the imagery you used - love is bright and powerful - love can make the darkest day sunny, every sunrise a sunshine smile.
Your poem is sweet and romantic. I love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

Thank you. I had the urge to write words for love today. I'm glad you like it.
This poem has an almost perfect structure and it also reads well. Also I love the words you have used within this poem. Please continue to write more and Thank you for posting this.
-sonnetmoon

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

Thank you sonnetmoon. I get the desire to write of love sometimes. Old age had distance me from day.. read more
Whenl love lasts through the years, it is divine...no doubt about it. When love is real, it does not hide....it dances through the town square in the sunshine...and in the rain. It rejoices and sings. Indeed, words need to be soft and tender if the love is to last. Your words are wise and the imagery is so pretty. I enjoyed this one, Coyote. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

Thank you Lydia for your kind words. I needed a poem of love today. I'm glad you enjoyed.
This is beautiful. Not sure about the one line - "lasting love and emotion is envies" - maybe take out the is or emotion is envy? Great write - and in description it's break a heart, of course, I know you know that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the advice. I was confused on the usage of envy or envies. Thank you for reading and .. read more
Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

No problem. I love your writing and your positive outlook on life.

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