Well, I know i`ve already reviewed this write but the title of this piece pulled me back again to visit this page so, i`m on here ... again.
The word`re quite romantic. You should sing such words to.. for your beautiful wife. I`m sure, you`d give you her love in disguise of giving some pats on your back ... Nice write!
Well, I know i`ve already reviewed this write but the title of this piece pulled me back again to visit this page so, i`m on here ... again.
The word`re quite romantic. You should sing such words to.. for your beautiful wife. I`m sure, you`d give you her love in disguise of giving some pats on your back ... Nice write!
Wow...its not often that a poem with such little amount of words can convey such a great feeling. I do know that in the past this was common, so I guess I should say that this would put you in the same category as the poets of old, not requiring hundreds of words to convey a simple feeling. Great job mate.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you. I try to be less epic. Better to express what you want is less words. Most readers won't .. read moreThank you. I try to be less epic. Better to express what you want is less words. Most readers won't read stories.
9 Years Ago
So true. unfortunately I am not as good in writing short poems so I do write stories, but I am glad .. read moreSo true. unfortunately I am not as good in writing short poems so I do write stories, but I am glad to see writers...or I should say artists like you are still around.
And yeah.. you really did something different with your awesomeness holding the passion in your hands. Beautiful imagery. I love the poem.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you my friend. Love is the way. I wish we all could learn. If we lead with love and kindness. .. read moreThank you my friend. Love is the way. I wish we all could learn. If we lead with love and kindness. The world would be a better place.
9 Years Ago
Yeah, if we treat the love right, the love`d absolutely lead us to the shores of happiness, no matte.. read moreYeah, if we treat the love right, the love`d absolutely lead us to the shores of happiness, no matter what.
Always a pleasure to read your work!
I love the easy brisk flow of this one.. The short concise lines accentuate how beautiful and meaningful she was to your life.. I really like this one!! I think you did an amazing job. It is one of my favorites by you sir. well done.. I love the carefully chosen and intricately placed words.. they tell more than a story, they paint a vivid picture and allow that emotion to flow off the page into the hearts of the reader... awesome...
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you April. I'm trying to be less epic. I like reading the poetry with minimum words and great.. read moreThank you April. I'm trying to be less epic. I like reading the poetry with minimum words and great meaning.
9 Years Ago
You're welcome.. well, I like it sir.. great job again..
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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