Fragile love

Love is tender. A wise person know to be kind and not be negative to the sweet people who attempt to love us.

                            Fragile love

You have been lingering upon my thoughts.
You have made promises we cannot keep.

Sweet words, kind words made me wish for faraway places that I can't arrive at.

Fragile love is like walking on a tight rope without a safety net.

What are the value of words?
Temptation allured the lonely in heart.
Making them wish to fall into serene arms of a kind lover.

You are far away from me.  The great sea separate us.

I have my pen and paper.
Kind words and photos to make me know.
I'm alone and you are faraway.

Fragile love based on people.
Separated and seeking different places and goals.
Will find dead-ends and sadness.
No fairytale endings for the unlucky in love.

                         Coyote?John Castellenas

Author's Note

Just words and thoughts. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Loved such lines... "You are far away from me.
The great sea separate us.
I have my pen and paper."

Very beautiful poem. You`re improving my friend... keep it up. This poem`s touched my heart and yeah, of course, it`s one of my favorites because i`ve found the depth of the real feelings for love... Excellent work! ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Wordsmith. Yearning for love create the best poetry.

[Wórdsmíth]

Welcome. I think, you`ve been far of your beautiful fragile wings the one in the million wife for a long time... because I think, you`ve pen`d this write when you were alone and missing here.. i`m not sure `bout it but let me hear you.. what if i`m right.

[Moon]

This line; No fairytale endings for the unlucky in love , really hits hard. It makes me feel the woe within in the words and makes me think of past times that were quite heartbreaking for me. A well written poem, I enjoyed reading it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Hayleigh. I had bad luck till I met my wife at 36 years old. I believe love comes when it support to.

[Moon]

You're welcome and that's great. I don't try to think too much about love, because to me it brings more stress than it does joy. But that's just how I feel.

[Brittany Evans]

beautiful. just simply amazing. As I was reading I was able to connect and feel the passion you have.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Brittany. I'm a old man. I have learn the good and the bad of love. I still appreciate love. I have three Grand-boys who keep me young become I knew love would come to me one day.

[JJHII]

I like this poem a lot. Even if it is not two people in a long distance relationship and speaks solely on the emotional disconnect with the other in arms reach. This reminded me how I felt for someone at one point in my life and not getting the same feelings back.

[Coyote Poetry]

Happen to the all of us. Two people not on the same page. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Anne Timmins]

This is a beautifully penned poem full of passion. Very lovely

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Anne. I appreciate the comment.

[An owl on the moon]

Soul aching in your words... too close to home...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Craig. I appreciate the comment.

[Ti]

Those words and thoughts had came alive in this poem :)
I'm guessing this is a long distance relationship?
The frustration and anxiety of wanting to see this person, must be devastating for you.
Indeed a love can be fragile, especially from a distance, I hope everything works out somehow for you :)
Lovely write :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[Ti]

Your welcome :)