The coming storm

Just words.

                                  The coming storm.

Her lustful glances left me condemned to fall into the harmony of her smile.

She was a rare desert flower that dazzled me with flattering words.

She whispered to me with a softness of a innocent angel voice, making me wish to live and
die in her words. Dear Poet, write me a poem. Make the poem sweet and where love flourish and arose
to destroy sadness and disappointment.
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      Dear Katie
Beautiful Katie, you released your veil,
showing me ivory skin of Winter.
I saw heaven in clear blue eyes and
the perfection of your womanly body.
I wish to caress your auburn hair with my wanting hands.
You made me bold and fearless once again.
I know you would be a coming storm.
Love would rise and fall in your warm embrace and sweet kiss.
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She gave me a devilish smile and asked me. I like the elements of the poem.
You wrote of the ending before the first act of love.
Does my love reveal decay before the first true kiss?

Old Poet smiled and he told her. I hold relics of love abandoned.
Love attained take time my sweet Katie. Let's make no promises till
we allow the midnight moon and sun to meet.

She falls softly into accepting arms. Her silence mean yes when new boundaries
of love are being built.

                                 Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

A new poem. I hope you like.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh wow, this way you have of capturing a moment, and wrapping it in a warm cloak of poetry, it is magical, it truly is. And I don't care if people see me gushing all over you if it gets them to read your fantastic work. I will PM you later, right now I just want to enjoy them.:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading. I appreciate the comment.

[Briana O'Connor]

a beautiful tale within the restraints to of letter correspondence. I love the way you express such endearment within each letter. Very elegantly wrriten.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I miss the days of letters. Letters were more personal and we could hold them/save them forever.

[B.J]

That is absolutely beautiful. Such a tender moment in time captured forever.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Barb. I appreciate the positive comment.

[B.J]

you're welcome

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

"I know you would be a coming storm."

Such a loving words you can feel the tender.

Great work my friend!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sarah. I appreciate the comment.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! This is one of your bests, CP. I like how you penned your lines here.
Bravo!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. Good to see you alive and active. I missed you.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Lol. Alive and active...at least once in a blue moon. I am so busy until February but glad I have time to be here today.
Have a good day!

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad you are here today.

[Madison O'Dwyer]

"Does my love reveal decay before the first true kiss?"

This whole poem is genius. I'm speechless.
A most wonderful piece! I enjoyed it so much I'm going to read it again now!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Madison. I appreciate the positive comment.

[Honey-Bee]

Love it! Such a Romantic Lovely write! Lets make no promises until we all the midnight moon and sun to meet! I love how you portray your understanding of the woman's heart and the tenderness to her!

[Coyote Poetry]

Better to not rush into love and make promises we cannot keep. Thank you Honey-Bee for reading my work.

[The Chosen Poet]

This is a mastepice , have no words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you The Chosen Poet. I appreciate the comment.

[Lily Mae]

This is my favorite of yours. Perfection Coyote. sigh... you like I say often have a gift to tell a story and this time it pulls at loves heart strings..xo

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lily Mae. I appreciate the positive comment dear friend.