Attempt at nine letter poetry.

Hard to create powerful poetry using minimum words.

                                Kiss
Elixir of kiss.
Love was young.
You were perfect.


                             Mistress
Mistress love.
Veil revealed.
Perfection remembered.


                              Vision
Noble vision.
Delicious nymph.
Treasured memory.


                              Harmony

Harming of dance.
Amorous emotion alive.
Blushing beauty delight.

                             Body

Fragrant of body.
Tracing of skin.
Falling into perfection.


                                   Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

New poetry. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

Wow this was electrifying. It may be a challenge to express depth within limits, but you did it quite flawlessly. Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[Ty]

This has incredibly unique rhythm. It's mystical but bold. I really enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ty for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[DIVYA]

A poem muc h appreciated and enjoyed. For me the first two stanzas were unforgettable.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Divya. I appreciate the comment.

[B.J]

Amazing expression of words. I liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Barb. I appreciate the comment.

[B.J]

You're welcome

[xDalliance]

The lack of words don't fail to express the emotion you wanted to put across. I think that's an amazing try, and I liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I was told. I write only epic. Trying to downsize.

[Tate Morgan]

A beautiful rendition of a poem great choice of words

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Tate. I appreciate the positive comment.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what is said in less, is often more....this is more...tightly wound together and powerful...

all could stand on their own as little poems, but they thread together nicely as a whole.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jacob. I wanted to try something new. Test my old mind.

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, a departure for you, but still it retains the shape and feel of your emotional tomes. I am so impressed. Glad I saw it in the feed.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. The epic Poet trying less words.

[emmajoy]

There's a touch of tradition of this, John .. a bit of Bill Shakespeare magicked by our preciously romantic Coyote Poetry! Tis a very fine piece of writing but, very much you, especially in the final stanza.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Emma Joy. I appreciate the kind words.

[MsJewel]

It is difficult to write using only a few words, and yet you did this perfectly in this romantic, sensual little gem. Beautiful poetry my friend

:) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Julie. Trying to expand how I use words.