The sea

The sea

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
"

Best place to be. Near the sea with good friends, music and free time.

"
                              The sea

I told her. Become like the sea. Move with the dancing waves, free and uncontrolled.
Enter into the meditation of the sea. Listen to the ancient voices. Take in the quiet whispers
of lovers who came before us.

Returning lovers return to sing the phrases of love. Interlocked lovers celebrate each  embrace and kiss.
If you listen. Can hear sweet words of endearing lovers saying sweet words of love. Come to me again. Let's
celebrate the dance of forever with the kind sea.

The Gods of the sea, moon and stars allowed the lovers to bare their true selves. They whispered to the
lovers. Enough of sadness and time for forgiveness. It is time to dream, sing  and dance.

We will stand by the sea. Allow the cold salt water to awake the hope and innocence of youth. I told my
lover. Come to me with a open heart and leave the excuses behind. We need to wrap our hope and dreams together. Allow the warmed of us holding tightly to bond two life together.

Let's create a story of love that will be sung by the powerful sea.

                           Coyote/John Castellenas  
                       Wrote in 1992/rewritten in 2014


© 2014 Coyote Poetry


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We will stand by the sea. Allow the cold salt water to awake the hope and innocence of youth.


Let's create a story of love that will be sung by the powerful sea.



These 2 stanza's lines spoke to me the most very moving and inspiring.



Be like a shimmering wave dancing with the glimmer
of the suns bright blazing orange rays of light sliver and blue
lining upon the crystal like waves Hearts making love.



Very inspiring thank you maybe I'll have a new poem a brewing :)




Thank you for sharing my friend. Blessings. Benita

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Thank you Benita. I always appreciate your comment.
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

you're welcome. thank you for the inspiration. :)



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We will stand by the sea. Allow the cold salt water to awake the hope and innocence of youth.


Let's create a story of love that will be sung by the powerful sea.



These 2 stanza's lines spoke to me the most very moving and inspiring.



Be like a shimmering wave dancing with the glimmer
of the suns bright blazing orange rays of light sliver and blue
lining upon the crystal like waves Hearts making love.



Very inspiring thank you maybe I'll have a new poem a brewing :)




Thank you for sharing my friend. Blessings. Benita

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Thank you Benita. I always appreciate your comment.
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

you're welcome. thank you for the inspiration. :)
Hi Coyote, I hope you do not mind but I read this several times and was inspired to add to the warmth and depth of it.

The sea

I told her as we walked along the shore
‘Become like the sea. Move with the dancing waves, free and uncontrolled. Feel in your soul the meditation of the braking surf; listen to the ancient voices as the free spirit of the wind insists the spirit of the water wash in stinging spray upon the rugged shore. Hear the quiet whispers of all the lovers who came before us. Returning romantic hearts, back to sing phrases of love. Interlocked and celebrating each embrace and kiss; water upon rock and sand, rock and sand upon water. And if you listen closely you can hear sweet words of endearment spoken to tell the tale, urging one another again, and again into such a sweet embrace. Let's celebrate this eternal dance where the brutal breakers beat upon the shore by night and day and where the Gods allow lovers to bare their true feelings beneath star encrusted skies; and where they whisper to those lovers
“Enough of sadness, time for forgiveness, it is time to dream again, time to sing and dance once more.”

We will stand by the sea. Allow the cold salt water to awaken our hope and the innocence of youth.’
I told my lover
‘Come to me with an open heart and leave all excuses in the watery deep. We need to bind our hopes and dreams together, allow the warmth of our union in this sultry embrace to bond our lives as one.

So let us recreate a story of love that will be sung forever by the ocean.’


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Poetry is support to be recreate. Thank you for your version and stopping by.
John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kindness and your inspiration.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
WOW...seductive and mystical words, John. "Take in the quiet whispers of lovers who came before us." Celestial references and the sea.....ultra romantic. Indeed, all excuses must be washed out to sea when two lovers meet. Absolutely stunning work. Lydi**


Posted 9 Years Ago


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Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Thank you Lydia. The sea is the best place to find peace.
Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

I agree, John.
to the
ancient voices. Take in the quiet whispers
of lovers who came before us.

A beautiful, philosophical and romantic piece.

Let's create a story of love that will be sung by
the powerful sea.

memorable lines. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Thank you Zahra. I appreciate the comment.
Lets create a story of love ....

what a beautiful expression, what a beautiful idea of love, well expressed, well written work here to read,
thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Thank you. The sea allowed us to know. Hope and dreams should be wide and open like the great Pacifi.. read more
LOVERS AT SEA

moving with dancing waves
listening the whispers of anicent lovers
celebrate kisses interlocked
enchanting sweet words
those endaring lovers
baring their truth
the lovers dream at sea
wrapped hopes and dreams
together the love birds expose
their hearts to open sky

After reading your poem Coyote I try to summarize the main events. Hope you shall remember me again............
Have a great time! Miss you...
Please do tell me how it is?

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a fine story about love. The is simple yet express at volume. I really enjoy your poetry .. The last stanza I like most in which the real sentiments are vividly expressed...
Thanks sharing sir...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.
M.A.Rathore

9 Years Ago

Welcome please see my haiku friend and let me know how they are...Have a nice time...
Something about the sea brings out the romance in most people. For me it brings peace and dreams. Nice write. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Thank you Valentine. I agree. The sea id a good place to rest and find love and peace.
You got an interesting mix of romance and spirituality, I like that a lot.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

You are welcome sir.

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