Coffee, you and the sun.

Woman are the hope and mystery to their men.

    Coffee, you and the sun

The kind sun rest upon your tender skin.

The warm coffee and deep thoughts leave me wishing.

To know what you hide beneath those perfect eyes.

Coffee, you and the sun. Things needed to make me know.

You are the beauty and joy that keep the darkness away.

Coyote/John Castellenas

(Thank you what-id-wear. Tumblr for photo)

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Author's Note

A new poem. I hope you like.

Reviews

[ANTO]

I love the Jepoardy stylings of this line CP
"Coffee, you and the sun. Things needed to make me know." - very cleverly inserted without making the poem whimsical. I like this very much (do you have the number of the girl in the pic at all?)
yes - very cool indeed

[Coyote Poetry]

A Tumblr photo. A photo to make the writer want to write and create. Thank you Anto for reading and the comment.

[Yam]

This subject is mesmerizing!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[W R Stowe]

If my wife would of been behind me she would of been mad she's extremely jealous as seem all filipinas are nice poem and concept

[Gee]

Makes me want to grab a cup and join her,although people would think I'm her wrinkly old dad.Liked your poem very much

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't blame you. Thank you Gee for reading and the comment.

[Cryingkate]

HA everything is a point of view LOL.. ME? I'd be chasing her with a broom and telling her to get some clothes on and get away from the window.
Plus be scolding her for drinking coffee so young as she is.

:-) :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

I can't tell how old she is. If she is European. They love their coffee and don't like clothing. Good to see you dear friend stopping by. I could use a woman like her if I was 20 year younger. Today I drink my coffee, fully dressed and alone. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Emunah June.]

You, my good sir, have proven that few words can say so much. It is a beautiful collection of words put together intricately enough to give the reader a warm feeling and whet their appetite. Very well done, a great read!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[Emily Ring]

I love this poem. It reminds me of my most favorite days.
You have some of the best poems I have read. Have you composed a book out of them at all?

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Emily. This year I will get published. I'm gathering the poems and story now. I appreciate the comment.

[SheenLeigh]

Thou its night here in my country when I read your poem it feels like I wanna have a coffee while staring the rays of the sun. Beautiful poem, its short but is has depth.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sheen Leigh. Always a good time to drink coffee and watch the raising sun or the dust of night appearing.

[SheenLeigh]

more than that, i like reading your poem with the warmth of the coffee and the sun :)

[Diana]

Nice, easy-going. Sort of an early morning dreamland vibe to this...

[Coyote Poetry]

The nice photo gave me positive motivation. Thank you Diana for reading and the comment.

[Arsh]

If the woman's as warm as a cup of coffee, then, of course, she's a hope & a mystery as well as not even just to all the men, but to the world of love as well.

Worth-reading write/enjoyed every moment of this poetry-reading/Choice of words's too marvelous/A romantic soul spoke up to the world through you. Pleased to read this!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Arsh. We need beautiful places, people and memories to give us hope. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Arsh]

Of course, we all need everyone's support... as long as the support's full of strength. Pleasure to read!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Love the feel of this, John...gives the softest hint of sensuality, very nice!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kelly. The beautiful photo gave me reasons to write and wander to better places.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Isn't it wonderful, when the poet is inspired by the artist? Such a wonderful "birthing" when the two compliment each other so well!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. We need good words to make us create.