Unforgettable

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William Oxer

          Unforgettable

I found you waiting. Holding flowers of blue.

I watched you pondering life and possibility.

Your eyes rose up and you asked me. Was I okay?

I told you. I create an unforgettable memory. 

And it is you.

                        Coyote/John Castellenas

            

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

I told you I'm create a unforgettable memory.... There is a typo here, getting it resolved will beautify this short and nice poem the more... Think you want to write, "I'm creating AN unforgettable memory. Or if you should use create, then replace "I'm" with "I". You are great in your form, keep your pen always alive.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the help and reading. I do appreciate.

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

I owe you the thanks, for your understanding.

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your work. It is real and true. Had the Hemingway feel. Scary and true life comes alive in your words.

[TheLostMind]

Very beautiful. Very elegant. People will come and go. . But their memories will not fade easily. We will hang on to some memories. . some memories will hang on to our hearts. . Refusing to let go. Either way, they will remain there. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and I agree.

[Baby Ricochet]

We've all got some "unforgettable" memories. Damn

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. We need them when we get old. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Anne Lutz]

Very beautiful--I loved it! I wish I had something more beneficial to say, but I'm afraid I'm not well-read in poetry. However, I do think it was beautiful to read, especially out loud. Nice work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Anne. I appreciate the comment. We are here to learn and teach each other. Writing is a lifetime education. All of us with different thoughts, place and life. This make poetry and story so good. I enjoyed your work.

[Shekinah2015]

You're welcome, I enjoyed the read. The poem is short and holds the reader's attention. The picture fits into the theme perfectly. Good work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Victoria for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Jamestown]

Very nice, kind words and beautiful artwork, wonderful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment.I do appreciate.