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In your lap

In your lap

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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The safety of love. No better place to be.

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                           In your lap

If I lost you.

I would become empty and alone.

When I’m lost and helpless.

I need your kind words and your embrace.

When I fall into the warmth of your lap and

I feel the gentleness of concern hands and words.

I know I will be okay. I love you my dear love.

                     Coyote/John Castellenas




© 2015 Coyote Poetry



Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
Beautiful photo create amazing poetry.

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A beautiful way to portray how each of us feel so protected, cocooned when we are in love. A picture does speak a thousand words, put beautiful poetry speaks even more. :)
Good one John

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Annie. I appreciate the comment.
I agree, this picture would bring a poem to mind and you have done this beautifully. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I did like the photo. Allowed me to feel the emotion. Best days when we can show weakness and sadnes.. read more
Valentine

2 Years Ago

You are very welcome. Kathie
A picture and a poem created, is something new I have come across. Thank you for this innovation (if I could say this way) and for your writing! Beautiful captivating words. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Madhu. I was taught this set-up by a talented writer 12 years ago. I believe artwork can e.. read more
Madhu

2 Years Ago

Yeah, it's pretty amazing! :)
A medieval scenery to match maybe an unrequited love by the picture. If I'm wrong I still loved this piece of yearning and and the magic.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Just a Tumblr photo. Had the feel of a more classic day. Thank you Andrew for reading and the commen.. read more
When one finds true love, it's like two people merging into one. And a face on a lap in an embrace feels just right for once. Full of love and support, tenderness and passion. That was a beautiful tribute to a beautiful picture and love.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nadia Gerassimenko

2 Years Ago

And what is weakness is actually strength. The strongest open their hearts and love. The weakest kee.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I agree. I have been reading your poetry book. It is very good dear Poet.
Nadia Gerassimenko

2 Years Ago

Really? I am so happy you like it! *HUGS*
Great truths in this piece!
In just a few lines you really sum up the importance
of having your special someone there to help when
the going gets tough! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Short and truthful. Another great write from Coyote! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Emily. I appreciate the comment Emily.

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A Poet and writer who love to read and write. My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life. Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words. Remembe.. more..

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