Hell or heaven

Just words.

                        Hell or heaven

When I fall into your eyes.

I feel like I’m dancing on a dangerous edge and close to paradise in the same second.

You can show me places of great pleasure and wild dance. You can show me my life is being wasted and I have been dead for too long.

Your wild eyes made me know. Dead men forget what living is. Dead men don’t dream, Just bleed for men who don’t care if we live or we die.

I love your eyes. They show me free forest, wild sea and uncontrolled river.  When I look into those your eyes. I yearn for wild places, sweet dreams and the long night in your embrace.

                 Coyote/John Castellenas

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Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Coyote, when I open up your poem and see a woman of this nature alluring and dangerous I know I'm in for a good ride and yet again you never fail me. such a good poem I simply enjoyed. And Yes how one is drawn into beautiful eyes. No wonder we get lost! Life is on a knife's edge sometimes just depends where you fall. Excellent write! My friend

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Andrew for reading and the comment. And I agree.

[andrew mitchell]

I go back to this just to see that face and eyes again and then I read your poem TRANSFIXED!

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

She's like yin and yang, showing you two faces of a coin. But never being dishonest about it. She can show you beauty and misery, gentleness and wildness, heaven and hell. She's a lover you can never be bored with, that is for certain.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. Photos are safe. Old Johnnie write the poetry. Stay away from the wild woman. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[wordman]

heaven or hell, I can see where this would take you to both

[Coyote Poetry]

Women and life can. Thank you wordman for reading and the comment.

[wordman]

I always enjoy your writing

[Jamestown]

Really nice piece of work and a terrific image as well!
If those eyes were gazing into mine, Lord forgive me, but I wouldn't be
thinking of no forest:) Thanks for sharing your amazing poetry
and b-blessed!

[Coyote Poetry]

You may be right. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.