My eyes adored you

My eyes adored you

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Thank you Frankie Valli and the Four seasons.

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                                    My eyes adored you


My sweet dream, my first dream and my last dream.
I loved you  since you  were my sweet and kind friend.
Always gentle and   sweet  words given to me by you my dear beloved.

 You held my hand walking to school and as we walked in the hallways of the High school..
I remembered your telling me of great dreams and hope.
I loved watching your face as you  sang and danced for me. .
I told you often.  You were so beautiful and perfect.

You laughed  at my words and we danced to song and dance of our time.
I learn as we separated.

My eyes adored you.   I learn words not spoken, burn more than words that were spoken.

                         John Castellenas/Coyote


                            









© 2015 Coyote Poetry


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Coyote Poetry
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Beautiful. Your words never fail to move me

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you Mia. I appreciate the comment.
I love how you write. Simple and to the point. This takes me back.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you Connie. The simple and kind memories become sweet dreams in old age.
It appears that this was a love that was incomplete
a love that was for reasons unknown or not to be
mentioned by the poet here was never to be fully
really realized. His eyes adored her.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Old wishes of High School. They do stay with us and thank you for reading and the comment.
Beautifully written. Loved it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you Aphiwe for reading and the comment.
"I learn words not spoken, burn more than words that were spoken" A genuine principle, causing both heartbreak and gratitude for the truth that it offers. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Beautiful lines appended with beautiful song. Bravo!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Its beautiful how with only adoring eyes one can speak chapters and volumes! Beautiful work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I agree. Adoring love is forever. To adore someone. Is true love. Thank you my friend for reading an.. read more
Rinzin Samdup

8 Years Ago

you welcome mate :)
It is funny how often we do learn from life experiences without one word ever spoken. Kathie Nice one John. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you Kathie. Frankie took me to good days. I do like the old songs.
Hello CP, such a cool piece of love in innocents, reminds me of
my old antics back in the days :-) And Love the Song as well,
One of my Mom's favorite :-) very cool Thanks.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

A great song and thank you my friend for reading and the comment.
Beautiful poem.
The innocence of childhood love and the remembrance of those special moments.
Always treasured..
Enjoyed reading this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you Jyoti. Young love is the sweetest love.
Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Indeed! You are welcome.

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