I need a wild heart

Just words

      


                                  I need a wild heart



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                       Love made me live

Beautiful woman told me. We need to bathe in the quiet and sweetness of love.
Love come when love wants.
The movement of love is like a song.
The rhythmically song take us to interlacing of hands, mouth and body.
Let's dance  nude upon the balcony and allow our love story to be whispered to the stars and the moon.

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                              Your flesh remembered you

Old man Winter had made us escape to the dark rooms where lovers celebrate the night.
You teased me. Dancing nude to the Leonard Cohen songs and you fell to bend knees and
with beautiful face near. You whispered. "Your flesh remembered me and I will always remember you.
I wrapped my arms around you and I wish to drift forever into your eyes.
I told you. Love demands payment. I know my payment is loving and needing you till my last breathe.
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Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Coyote, you know I adore your writing, as do most the other writers here who interact with you. I understand you do not want to start things by blocking people and taking their reviews down, but I don't think you should feel obligated to leave up rude reviews, especially when the person made sure it was long enough to stick as a featured review. Shameful. People may have their own opinions, but your work feels real and from the heart, and the style and simplicity are what makes it appealing. Anyone who doesn't see that is narrow minded and too rigid to see beauty in something that is not similar to what they themselves believe to be superior writing. Insults of other writers are not called for on this site. If you don't like something, just pass it by with grace and tact, and if you have true, constructive suggestions to help another writer, then do it quietly, and if necessary, behind the scenes.

[V]

I do abs agree with you. I have blocked this writer because of his weird and unkind review replies. We all have different styles and tastes, it's ok when one points out things to be changed that seem to be sort of disturbing or whatever about piece but I'd never put anyone down like this. If one doesn't like one's writings for any reasons, they should just stay away from it. I wouldn't even bother to leave a comment or review on writes I dislike.

[Lyn Anderson]

Exactly. There is no need to belittle others in this manner. It is hurtful and highly uncalled for. Read what you like, and review in a constructive way. It is not helpful to speak in general terms and call people down.

[V]

Yes, definitely.

[SJ Mullins]

The last word should be breath. You should remove the e. I always enjoy reading your work. You write so exquisitely. I look forward to reading more. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

[SJ Mullins]

You're welcome, sweetie. Anytime. I expect the same! :)

[Dave]

You write of the kind of love I believe we all wish to experience. I didn't see the critical review that was mentioned. As an artist, and surely you are, you must ignore those that can do nothing more than critique. When I write I write what I feel at that moment. If others like and enjoy it that is grand, but I will not and I hope you don't either, buy into those that delight in making others feel miserable because of their creativity.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dave. Positive and negative view. Both can help us. I appreciate both.

[Dave]

You are too kind or naive. In either case I imagine its a good quality to have.

[Coyote Poetry]

Writing is learning and improving. Need real opinions. Writers need hard skin.

[SJ Mullins]

I don't mind critiques, but some can be quite unkind. That is not necessary. I do agree with you, John, that writing is learning and improving. We need helpful critiques to help us be the best we can be as writers/poets. We do need to develop lizard skin!!!!

[Ellen Kolman]

Love made me live was so sexy and romantic .... and described love making so well..I just loved this poem.... it is just awesome.... many Bravos dear friend

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ellen. I appreciate the comment.

[Taylor]

Beautiful, delicate poem. You're always saying, "Just words" and indeed, they are never "just words." You evoke the mystery of love and the union/expression of the intangible in the tangible.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Taylor. I appreciate your kind words.

[Nisreen]

Well love takes all form
and physically does take on

a very sensual write

bravo

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[barleygirl]

Your poem is beautifully & gracefully expressed, Coyote. The 2nd line reminds me of how we must accept that the dove might not light upon our every day, but it only makes us savor the experience all the more. Clearly you savor every moment when love visits.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love comes rarely and a wise person enjoy the dance. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Jerryyoung1z]

Another wonderful write. Love, pasrion, emotions, we would be just an empty shell without them. And the passion of two lovers, nothing can be compared-except my love for food-. Thanks for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Food is a never forgotten need. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Jerryyoung1z]

You're welcome

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

It should be "Love demands payment"- you probably forgot to add 's' to demand.
This is a very lovely tale of love and affection. Your imagery is fascinating. Lines like "Dancing nude to the Leonard Cohen songs" are simply superb. They give your poem a narrative-touch. You have inter-weaved all the happenings really well and they adorn your work. Keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

[Veronique]

Ahh John my friend I have finally made it to your lovely page and came across this beautiful soft romantic write of the heart! The words {You whispered. "Your flesh remembered me and I will always remember you.} are some of the most beautiful I have ever read sweet friend and this write has touched my heart so.Love between a man and woman can be so wondrous when so gentle my lovely friend.Bravo for sharing this beautifully written write ! I very much enjoyed it ...Big country hugs and smiles to you dear one...Mary :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Veronique. I appreciate your kind words my friend.

[Veronique]

Always my pleasure dear friend...:)