Keep you

Just words

 

                       

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                          Keep you

I remember the day you saved me.
Your gentle eyes of hazel green saw me and
you caressed my face with your soft hands and you whispered.
"been too long dear Johnnie and you have been too sad. You need some tender loving care."

You embraced me and whispered.
"I will keep you safe my love and we will erase the bad days.
We will find the sea again and dance/drink with the sea till the old days are forgotten.
We will sing the sinner's lullaby and pray for rare and treasure place where we can be reborn."

I brought you closer and I whispered to you.
Dear Liz. Kind and sweet Elizabeth. You are my last wish to sing and dance to the sea and the night stars.
You are my gift of mercy and when you are near. My heart is brave and I believe. Life can be okay.

Two people sat together by the Lake St. Clair holding hands and watching the lake dance.  Falling into perfect silence and are content with the seconds where love is wild and free.

                          John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[ReedWrite]

Not just words, Coyote...beautiful words. Tender words. Hopeful words. Loving words. I think I loved the last line best: Falling into perfect silence and are content with the seconds where love is wild and free. Perfect silence. I love that. When two people can be toegether, without the rattle of conversation as a distractor...when they can just BE, without the need to clarify, qualify, or quantify...then it is perfect. Perfect silence! Nicely done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[mercy party]

the best part about this and a lot of your work is that you develop a setting that is a daydream. and at the same time its pure and awake. I love the love you write about, it's so settling. You are a great writer.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment and the kind words.

[Diamond]

A caring touch, a gentle hug, soothing words mean more when days are in trouble. Many times silence is soothing. such a warm read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Queen. I appreciate the comment.

[Dave]

Sweet, sweet tenderness. How beautiful to have such a love. Your words sing of love and I love it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dave. I appreciate the comment.

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Your pieces are so rich, this is a beautifully romantic tale. Starz x

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the comment.

[Tina Kline]

A very tender and touching tale. We all need someone to make us whole and help us to want to live again.
Very nicely done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too. Now I can write about perfect days. Thank you Tina for reading and the comment.

[Tina Kline]

You are very welcome.

[Ted Kniffen]

John, your prose has always been good. Great stories.
Sketches of a life that has touched and been touched by many souls, a life with love. This is one of your best. Good write

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ted. I appreciate the comment.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... there are many ways to love someone.
However, the romantic love in your poem is the essence of moonlight on a starry night. To capture that feeling in words is a gift. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pat and I agree.

[Patricia Wedel]

You are welcome, John. You have a gift of describing romantic feelings. truly, Pat

[Diamond Dunbar]

When you said "my heart is brave and I believe. Life can be okay." Reminds me of when you and your lover first meets and how willing your heart is to jump the gun and love a new face. Awesome poem love!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Diamond Dunbar. I appreciate the comment. When love overtake us. We forget the bad days.

[wordman]

a powerful write john,a womans love can save your soul,make you want to be loved ! love the music

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I love Jennifer Nettles. A amazing singer.

[wordman]

my pleasure john,and i love her to,loved the movie i watched of her last night..