I want to dance with you

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Ron Hicks, Slow Dance

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                                     I want to dance with you

The night is long and the songs are good.

You are looking so beautiful and your eyes are demanding my attention.

I whispered to you.

I want to get lost in you.

I want to dance with you till the midnight hours are used up and gone.

I want to hold you near

and feel your body close.

You are my ambrosia and my sweet delight.

My lady love. I want to dance with you.

          John  Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Island Hippy]

Aloha John, this is all things romantic and the kind of simplicity that speaks volumes to the heart. Simple acts like dancing together are incredibly intimate and I love dancing with my husband and realise now that we don't dance enough :) A passionate write. Izzy

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Izzy. I appreciate the comment.

[Island Hippy]

You're welcome

[Farmgirl]

A man that imagines dancing with the woman he longs to love and spend time with

ahh... Speechless !

I didn't know that still existed in Men Lol


Another great piece Coyote ...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and I appreciate the comment.

[Farmgirl]

:) thanks for sharing i appreciate you as a writer and value your short stories and poems greatly!

[CAPOLAVORO]

I want to dance with somebody who feel like this towards me too. Haha. You choice of words are good. The four first person lines are used very well as you describe truly how you feel. Well done. Keep writing. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[CAPOLAVORO]

You are very much welcome friend. :)

[Surya]

Haha, just words but expressed a lot...such a sweet love...I enjoyed...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[Poetic License]

Eloquent and dashing, a gentlemans formal bow to his lady in poetry. Beulautifully done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Poet. I appreciate the comment.

[Fran Marie]

A very romantic poem filled with intense emotion flowing with choice of selective an seductive words you use..beutifully penned....

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Fran. I appreciate the kind words.

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Wonderful write . Like some old song from lost generation. Feeling love and feeling passion.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Dave]

Mmmmmm. I know whereof you write. You write of it so well. I have always felt that little else matches the close intimacy one achieves except in dancing.

Take care - Dave

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Dave. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Just words you say, but they are beautiful meaningful words.
This is such a romantic and sweet little write.
Filled with such emotion, passion and love.
I thought the picture was a nice touch as well.
I enjoyed reading this.
Keep writing always :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my dear friend. I do appreciate the comment.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your welcome :)

[Ardra]

Who can refuse such offer ...
:)
Your creations always bring smile on my lips ...thanks for sharing your wonderful creations.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ria. Dance and love. They do connect us.