Without you

Just words

                     


                            Without you


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                         A masterpiece

Lascivious days and nights. I loved you like you were my last breathe.
I knew at the hello. You would break my heart one night.
You were my masterpiece. Wanting eyes and demanding body made the strong man weak.
You made love come alive and made me wish.
The nights and days would last forever.

We drank the German wines and we drank in the long kiss and the heavy embrace.
We were lovers trying to find the deepness of the utopia of living and dying in the emotions
of desperate days and desperate nights.

We knew. Love is balance on needles and threads. Balancing on kind words and locked doors where lovers
can be free and born. The damn world torn us apart. Left me standing alone without you.

Today I paint a masterpiece where love didn't die and you and I.
Did know and find utopia of forever.

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Music, tender picture and words all combine to paint a portrait of fresh, young love when all is incredibly sensuous and perfect. You share a golden memory with us and we thank you for it. Your words, so real and lyrical, create unforgettable moments. "Today I paint a masterpiece"- and you truly have my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Annette. I appreciate your comment.

[barleygirl]

I love your masterpiece of a love poem, along with the adorable pic of the young romancer (you). Your love expressions convey passion & knowing, which is such a nice combination (((HUGS)))

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate. Some people become a part of you. Even if they have forgotten you.

[barleygirl]

I know exactly what you mean!

[Lenard L. Banks III]

Wow Coyote you have moved me once again with your work... Not many people have the ability to move me emotionally with their work but every time you seem to wow me. This poem was dope to the freaking max!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lenard. I appreciate the kind words.

[Prashant Bajpai]

good one keep writing and the more your write the more you enhance

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Prashant. I appreciate the comment.

[Weeping willow]

Wow! such enchanting words fill your poem.As I read it brings me closer to dreams of a time when love was so much more alive in my life. I can relate to your words;-]

[Coyote Poetry]

First true love. Never forgotten. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.

[Weeping willow]

Welcome,loved it;-]

[Pravir]

Very well written and beautifully described emotions. . keep sharing . . i loved it

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pravir. I appreciate the comment.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another hugely sensitive romantic write Coyote. You put such reality into these pieces which have such sadness yet such beauty as you choose your words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Old memories become sweeter with distance and time. Thank you John for reading and the comment.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

A beautiful write...your works are always different and yes, they make me speechless....keep writing dear!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Wajiha. I appreciate the comment.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

always a pleasure...

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Loved this it took me back to some time some place I'd forgotten thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Julie for reading and the comment.