Real perfection

Just words.

 



                               Real perfection


Pretty lady soaking in the bathtub. Bubbles covering perfect skin and long legs. The candies are burning incense of the tropical flower and the lights are low. The soft songs of Leonard Cohen are whispering sweet words of love and passion.

A lucky man using a water hose with warm water pouring into the  relaxing woman hair. He gentle add shampoo of strawberry into her hair.  He washes her hair with gentle caress and he sang to her.

"Fa, la, la, la, la.
I love you more.
I love you less.
You are so beautiful to me.
My dear muse, my dear siren.
I love your face and I love your long legs.
I love the curve and the movement of perfect body.
I love when you smile and I never want to make you cry.
I want to live and die with you.
You are perfection."

He washed her hair slow and easy. Allowed her to keep her eyes close.
Making every movement and touch,a gift of  love and appreciation.
He loved moving his hands through her long brown hair and watching her purr with joy.

She opened her eyes and she whispered. Why are you so kind to me?

Old poet smiled  and he  whispered into wanting ears.
You are my everything and everything is you.
When you bathe and allow me near.
I'm just a honored and blessed man by a kind angel.

                         John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Decidious wind]

Every time that I read something of yours I imagine the scenes you set very clearly. It seems surreal. Beautiful is an understatement to your unique choice of words and the way in which you set out your poetry.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate your kind words.

[peter Duggan]

This is a beautiful poem of love, with such lovely images. I enjoyed every bit of your read, my friend. It was a pleasure to read you. I loved it....Peter

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Peter for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Paul Bell]

You can feel the closeness in this. I say that, as no woman has ever let me near their hair with water.
Yet in different countries throughout the world, people are more relaxed. Must just be western women who don't trust us.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I was station for many years outside of the USA. Woman seem more fearless and open. Thank you Paul for reading and the comment.

[Great Aunt Astri]

This poem is so beautiful. For a moment I imagined I was that pretty lady soaking in a bubble bath. Those words from the 'old poet' were like manna to my mind!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the comment.

[Relic]

It is a lucky man indeed that can find that kind of love and admiration for his special woman.

Nicely done Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

We must tried and thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[ReedWrite]

Such great word, Coyote! What a beautiful tribute to love. Rich imagery, and deep emotion. Perfect.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Hebe]

So gentle are your words they paint a beautiful moment.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Prismgirl]

You paint a beautiful picture with your words. Good read. x

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

I think I speak for all women when I say- Thank you Coyote you know how to take care of a woman! Sigh..........:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Annette for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.