A spring flower

A poem for my story- poet's love

A Spring flower




Was a Spring flower.
So tall and so beautiful.

Was a Spring flower.
That reached for the sky.
The sky and the sun adored her.

She would dance with the wind.
The wind would whisper love songs to her.

Late Summer came and the flower slowly weaken and faded away.
The sky cries great rain/snow and the sun hid behind the clouds.

In early Spring.
The flower appeared again.

The rain and snow stopped.
The sun shined from morning dawn to nightly dust.

The gentle wind danced with the beautiful flower again.
The world became beautiful and wonderful once again.
                           John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Poem for my story.

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Such a delightful poem, full of joy and the flame of hope that burns eternal in the human spirit. The poem is very endearing in its simplicity and beauty and will stay in my heart for a long time to come. I read it out aloud to my son and he was spellbound!

The gentle wind danced with the beautiful flower again.
The world became beautiful and wonderful once again.

Awesome!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Divya. I appreciate the kind words and comment.

[DIVYA]

It was such a joy to read, sir. Thank you for sharing!

[Silmara McGarry]

How I always love poems related to nature...This one is Stunning, refresh and so captivating. I cant say it how much I love it!
:-)))

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Silmara. I appreciate the kind words.

[Indigomoon]

So amazing i love the comparison of a human to a flower and such great discription of the way of human delights in a metaphor of nature

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. Us and nature are more common than we believe.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Just so lyrical and graceful and musical, like flute notes on the wind...your evocative words penned in ageless style like fairy brushstrokes on parchment...the “beautiful Spring flower” dances on once again and all is right with the world. I love and am saving this jewel of a poem Coyote. Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Annette. I appreciate the comment.

[Moonie]

Very elegant and gentle. Your words are as beautiful and gossamer as delicate flower petals..

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Hebe]

Lovely imagery .... love intertwined with natures beauty, very serene.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Angelheart1]

Your words bring a freshness to the lifecycle of a spring flower. A very delicate piece of writing Coyote. Angel

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Angel. I appreciate the kind words.

[Giulia King]

This is so beautiful. I love every single word!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Giulia. I appreciate the comment my friend.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Coyote Poetry.

I was reading the poem out loud, and I felt the beauty of the flower spread through the entire poem.

You poem has a soul.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Satoshi. I appreciate your kind words.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

A lovely piece of poetry ! I am just afraid I read it in the wrong season, being autumn now ! Elegant in its simplicity. Very enjoyable to read :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Raghib]

Grasping and a very delighting poem . Even without the context of your story , the description of a spring flower is brought about easily and fluently .

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.