Break me, make me believe

Break me, make me believe

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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                             Break me, make me believe
                       

I want to be here. This is the place I need to be,
Pretty lady.
Break me, make me believe in you.
Make me believe in the long night and
make me believe.
You need me.

Kiss me, break me.
Make me live and die in your eyes.

I want your hands in my hands.
I want to feel the tender touch of your demanding hands on my wanting skin.
I need your  soft lips upon my lips.
Making me sing out in joy and thankfulness.

I want to hear your soft voice.
Telling me.
Please Poet seize my heart and make me beg for more.
I want to sing words of love that will make the Gods smile.

I brought my pretty lady closer and I whispered.
You sang to me and you make me believe.
Love is sweet and wonderful.
I want to hear you whisper.

Break me, take me.
Make me believe  you will  love till we can't love no-more.

                         John Castellenas/Coyote

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© 2017 Coyote Poetry



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Coyote Poetry
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Just words ...but so so beautiful...sometimes I wonder what inspires us to write what we do no matter how beautiful OR ugly the verse! Like information on Facebook or such never to be erased the words of the poet, the canvas of the painter...will always remain though we be long gone! Great work!

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Coyote Poetry

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Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.



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I love it very beautiful you have a talent for romantic poems my friend. I shall continue reading your poems as I find them breathtaking and simply beautiful.

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Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate the kind words.
Indigomoon

1 Week Ago

Anytime my friend:)
You make "surrender" sound soooo tempting! I believe that all good experiences require a fair amount of surrender, so your message of taking a dive into love/passion resembles the true magic of coming together (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

Thank you Margie for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
What an awesome love song you wrote here Coyote! The title, form, lyrics, , bridge- all so deeply moving and perfect...”your demanding hands on my wanting skin”...sensual, graceful, musical, beautiful!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Annette. I appreciate the comment.
Annette Pisano Higley

3 Weeks Ago

You’re very welcome Coyote!
Beautiful poem! It read with passion, beauty and poetry! I love that song, and it's video. I listen to it often.
Tyfs!!!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

A great song and thank you my friend for reading and the comment.
Cyprian Van Dyke

3 Weeks Ago

You're most welcome!
Just words ...but so so beautiful...sometimes I wonder what inspires us to write what we do no matter how beautiful OR ugly the verse! Like information on Facebook or such never to be erased the words of the poet, the canvas of the painter...will always remain though we be long gone! Great work!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.
' Please Poet seize my heart and make me beg for more.
I want to sing words of love that will make the Gods smile. '

Loving, wanting, needing.. every word, every phrase.. as near to beautiful heat as one could write"

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
emmajoy

3 Weeks Ago

Always It's always a pleasure to read your posts, john..
Flows out like a song in the country music scene ;-]
Wonderfully expressed.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

This was my goal. A song. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.
Very beautiful, my friend. The healing power of a good woman is phenomenal!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

I agree and thank you for reading and the comment.
The Iron Horseman

3 Weeks Ago

You're welcome. Coyote.
Poetically Romantic

Great Read

Matthew

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Matthew. I appreciate the comment.
Wow.. Just words you say.. But for a moment you made me believe. Exquisite piece my friend.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

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