Landscape

Landscape

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Just words

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                               Landscape
Forget me not and
please remember me always.
I remember you.
You were perfect valleys and you were like the free mountains of the California desert.
Your body, perfect landscape to discover secrets and know wonderful places.
The landscape of soft and tender skin became my rhyme and song to the sea and for the forest.
I remember the taste of your skin and your tempting smile.
You were my perfect journey.
Forget me not and remember me always.
I remember you.
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                               Drifting
I didn't know.
You and I were just seconds, minutes and hours.
Today I write letters, never to be send.
Regards to you my muse, my siren, my love and my murderer.
I whispered to the half-moon.
I didn't know.
Love was just a illusion.
So damn hard to hold on to and we can never forget.

                          John Castellenas/Coyote


© 2018 Coyote Poetry



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Coyote Poetry
Just words.

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Zoe
The 'landscape' part reminds me of a line- "Everyone in the world has one poem, that is their soulmate". Guess that sums up quite a lot. The second part- goodness me! Wonderfully eloquent lines! Really liked this one-'Regards to you my muse, my siren, my love and my murderer'. A very romantic write, as ever.


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Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

Thank you Zoe. I appreciate the comment. I believe you are right. Few people can excite our heart an.. read more
Zoe

9 Months Ago

Most welcome



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Coyote, I loved the first two lines especially, then read on and loved the rest too. The use of metaphor in this is really beautiful.

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Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

Thank you Dotty. I appreciate your kind words.
Love was just a illusion.
So damn hard to hold on to and we can never forget.

I like these two lines, speaks out how love can sometimes be unreal if we are hurting. but no matter what it is still very hard to go.

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Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

You are right. Love is a honor to behold and to know. Rarely touches a life. Thank you for reading a.. read more
sette

9 Months Ago

you are very much welcome
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Zoe
The 'landscape' part reminds me of a line- "Everyone in the world has one poem, that is their soulmate". Guess that sums up quite a lot. The second part- goodness me! Wonderfully eloquent lines! Really liked this one-'Regards to you my muse, my siren, my love and my murderer'. A very romantic write, as ever.


Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

Thank you Zoe. I appreciate the comment. I believe you are right. Few people can excite our heart an.. read more
Zoe

9 Months Ago

Most welcome
You always touch our hearts with Your sensitive spirituality and in depth passions, describing beauty not all can be able to, some gorgeous expressions here, where love become larger and larger.... Thank You*

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Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

You are very kind dear friend and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Light

9 Months Ago

anytime my friend*
These are wonderfully expressed words,Each soul in passing connects.

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Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
yes, but this illusion was grand while it lasted...and you explored love....
j.

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Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

You are right my friend and thank you for reading and the comment.
"You were my perfect journey." You remember her so fondly and with such passion, John. No doubt she remembers as well. No matter how brief the connection, it meant something. Such a lovely reminiscence. Lydi**

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Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

Thank you Lydia. Old memories become more sweet with time and distance.
There's always that time and place where people touch you for a time.
It's always pleasing when this happens.
We're all out here living. But some memories get you through the day.

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Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

I agree Paul. Thank you for reading.
I couldn't write this. I could put down the words, but it wouldn't feel the same. You have your own touch.
Jon

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Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

Thank you Jon. Just my attempt at short poetry.
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mou
it's more than words..!so soothing to have a pleasant and warm love..read it quite like a lyrics..thank you Coyote for sharing this with us

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Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the kind words.

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