First love- A rewrite

Just words. 40 year old poem.

First love

Once, in a sweet memory. A sweet and beautiful young woman came to me, her kind smile opened the door to conversation on a warm Germany Spring day in 1978..
The first taste of the her sweet lips, our two hands becoming one, the long walks and talks leading two people to sweet dreams and wishes.

 

I learn the feeling of love can’t be stop.
When love touches the heart,
life had reason and purpose.

 

When my love was near,
I feel alive and strong,
I feel weak and safe at the same time.

 

All I did was think of her.
The girl with the beautiful blue eyes and who love to dance.
Her love torn down years of disappointment.
I feel strong and content.

 

I needed  her body near,to be able to taste her sweet lips day and night.
To swim in her love forever and know peace.
Sweet love, paradise of the warm sun and cold nights.
Allowed two hearts to become one.
I will always love you my beautiful Daniela.

 

 

Coyote
1978

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Beautiful- and that’s what true love is all about not stopping to think about the person, wanting them near, going weak at the knees every time you see them, I believe when you are inlove you need to touch eachother feel eachother all the time- wonderful words🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

My first published poem in some magazine in 1982. I wrote in 1977. Thank you dear Kelly for reading and the comment.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Pleasure🌹

[lightsong]

when I read 1978 tears fill my eyes even more... You are always amazing in writing the deepest of emotions effortlessly, so emotively, and always... always... touch us inside with the most beautiful poignant passionate profound touch, Your words are far from being just beautiful and wise, they came from a pure heart, and they echo ethereal pureness... Thank You my friend for the pure beauty of Your heart.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the kind words. First love isn't ever forgotten.

[Ghost]

Wonderful share Johnnie... It showed love and longing... Nice share

[Coyote Poetry]

A old poem Ghost. Thank you for reading.

[Ghost]

Hey your welcome... I like reading your poems..

[Najam Us Saher]

This poem sounds just as passionate as the old times. Lovely words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Najam for reading and the comment.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

You're always welcome.