The moon and the stars

Just words

             The moon and the stars

Once I was free and a wild soul, wanting and needed nothing. I was looking for the idyllic setting, place of perfect view and the dancing sea.

I wanted the darkness till I saw her eyes. Her golden brown eyes seeing me and making me feel the want to see the light of the day again, wanting to be near her, to be able to listen to her sweet voice.

She was  more pretty than a million stars on a clear Monterey night. I asked you. Dear pretty lady sweet, why do you come near me?

She came to me and she wrapped your arms around me. She whispered. "Life can be lingering hell, filled with emptiness and turmoil. Or we can leave the days of yesterday behind us, make this day, our best days, dear poet. You and I had drank the sour wine and we need to taste the sweetness of the Fall sweet wine. Love cost little, when we are content with enough. Greed in love steal the sweetness and tenderness. Tonight, you and I shall dance a Fall waltz with the Pacific. A new night, a new place and the sea. Utopia for us dear poet."

I brought her, to her feet. We danced with the sea and for the stars and I told her. You are my idyllic place. Please hold me close till our love become forever written upon the night sky and the kind sea, will tell a tale, of love forever.

              Johnnie/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[kianatahleigh]

My first thought after reading this was, Beautiful. This was certainly a lovely piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[kitty]

A promise of love - eternal. Beautiful read! Thanks for sharing this lovely piece

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kitty for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[kitty]

My pleasure!

[Mari' Emeraude]

Lovely words describe a beautiful love story.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mari. I appreciate the comment.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a magically romantic scene... and she spoke words to live by.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[sonnie ibadah]

Aww, this is so beautiful!

[MoonChildPoetry]

i wish more people would see love as something like this again. i love your spin of words. very beautiful piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you MoonChild. I agree. Would be a better world if love was alive and well.

[MoonChildPoetry]

Very true.

[ayesha cullen]

A very soothing piece of romance. I loved it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ayesha for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[sette]

such romantic words from a romantic man speaks volumes of love and longing.. nicely written as always

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Lyn Anderson]

Gorgeous. As always. I can't help but picture you signing books for swooning women. Your romantic works are truly mesmerizing. Sorry, no critique.:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are very kind Lyn and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Crowley]

A wonderful waltz with the sea. I love how a lot of your work is placed in northern California. It helps me picture it. Your writing is special to this place. i love every minute I am reading it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Crowley. I love Northern California.