Whiskey

Just words.

                         Whiskey

Lovely Liz

With pen and paper I write, spilled blood upon notions of things wanted and so damn far away.
We secretly abated love and you became my wish to behold. I wanted you. To taste your lips like  the Crown Royal whiskey. Slow and easy.

You called me honey, sweetie and dear. I called you my dark mistress, my haunting mademoiselle and endearing perfect beauty.

We pro-longed deep and long kisses. Knowing we treaded on quicksand where love could not grow.
My lovely Liz. I want us to run away and I want to know your secret places and learn glimpse of the storm you try to hold in. I see in your eyes. Tamed life starving for the midnight dance and I feel your longing for new places and someone to worship your face, your skin and your heart.

We danced once the deadly dance of free love and we exposed real skin and voice.
Sadly we accepted less dear Liz.

I pray you have escaped and find someone who loved you like the rising moon and the dawn sun. I pray you know laughter and you will dance the magic movement of where lovers. Know the wildness and freedom of hiding nothing and showing real skin and real face.

John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Coyote or JOhn I am so glad I read this this is superb in my humble opinion. I loved it from beginning to end the title actually got me in. I loved it, is this a true story about yourself and someone else or is it fiction, if you dont want to say i understand but either way i loved it to bits. Its on my favs now!

[Coyote Poetry]

It was true. A old tale. Us writers need memories and wishes. Thank you Julie for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[ms. barrie]

the heartfelt romanticism that your pen captured in this piece is simply breathtaking, dear friend. stunning choice of words that leaves the reader wanting more. thank
you so much for the read ~ x

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I do appreciate the comment.

[olla]

this is a wonderful piece.. you captured my attention with spilled blood and notions of things longed for but so far away.. only one who knows that bittersweet taste can hold it to the end.. and you did...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you olla. I appreciate the kind words.

[Neville]

Another amazing poetic tale here John...the reader could very easily find themselves intoxicated by your words... and which clearly describe a depth of feeling as complex as the distilled liquor you named them after..... a great write, a great read..... Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

Than you Neville. Good to be intoxicated by life.

[Neville]

It most certainly is my good friend... Neville

[barleygirl]

This one is more complex & multi-layered & nuanced than some of your love stories. I love that. My favorite -- second paragraph -- she has one-word nicknames & you have longer ones. This makes me smile at the way we writers tend to over-complicate! *smile* Another favorite, next paragraph -- the way you describe how you can sense there's something deeper in her -- nicely expressed! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Margie. Us, who love to write. Love to use the words.

[Onlyme]

Beautiful Coyote, heartfelt, sentiments. Really touched the reader's heart and core as you read it. Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dawn. I appreciate our kind words.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Beautiful! This invokes so much emotion and makes you feel the yearning. "Knowing we treaded on quicksand where love could not grow" hit me. Very well done. :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[wordman]

it`s bad when you`re stationed over seas and meet these beautiful women,
you fall in love only to leave and never return

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend. Later in life. Become good memories. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[wordman]

you`re welcome john

[silentwriter180]

A heartwarming story full of love. Very nice.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Ardra]

You always make me belive in love.... and when I think that it's really waste of time hehhe I have to read your words to feel that maybe ...somewhere it does happen...a magic perhaps....
Ah those kisses sealed in memory very beautifully captured and thank you sharing your words and world with us...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ardra for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[sette]

such potent words for a potent liquor a sign of despair and hope at the same time... such lovely sentiments too

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.