You are my story

Painting and words.

     You are my story

Pretty wishes, savored dreams are you.

I have loved you always,

I love you in the morning light, 

I loved you when you dance for the midnight moon and

I love when you read to me.

My kind lady of gentleness,

you make my mad world, sweet and kind.

Please steal my eyes, my thoughts.

Make me believe,

love is sweet and you are my love

      Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Hasan669]

A lovely tribute to what seems to be an imaginary lady who fills the thoughts. A good free verse poem, and one that expresses yearning. One suggestion for the last line: perhaps you could say 'love is sweet, sweet is love'? This reversal of words is a poetic tool that was used by John Keats. I think, however, that the last line as it is, adds strength to the first line. Otherwise the poem is easy to read and to the point.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Hasan. I appreciate the help.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this poem sways with the rhythm of love...

beautifully----

j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jacob. I do appreciate the comment.

[Lydia Shutter]

Tender and gentle romance in this glorious poem of love. John, you have outdone yourself. Truly one of your best! Lydi***

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia. I appreciate your kind words.