You

Some words.

In your lap

If I lost you,
I would become empty and alone.
When I’m lost and helpless.
I need your kind words and your embrace.
When I fall into the warmth of your lap and
I feel the gentleness of concern hands on my face and your sweet words.
I know I will be okay. I love you my dear love.

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                       You

Life is less hard with you,

the night is sweeter when you bewitched my heart,

You make the stars more bright,

you make the moon more wonderful,

you make being alive with you,

a place I want to be.

                               Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Aw Coyote, (John), this is beyond beautiful, insightful, loving, heartfelt, meaningful moving and beyond words. It really touches the winners of one's heart and soul. And makes you want to cry. With the amount of depth and feelings and emotions, it holds within it. We all need love. Closeness and a bond with someone special to us. And your poem states that so very clearly. Thank you for sharing your words and emotions with us all.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Dawn. You are right. Only love can save us.

[Chris Shaw]

Life can't be complete unless there is a special person to share everything with, both the good and bad. Beautiful romantic poetry Coyote. Warms the heart. All good wishes.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Chris. I agree. Hard world walking alone.

[Chris Shaw]

It would be. Loneliness is deadly. Have a great day my friend.

[Rye]

This is such a lovely, beautiful write, I really love this piece. amazing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ryanna for reading. I appreciate the comment.

[Anjeline]

Beautifully written coyote. I loved the language and the poem:-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Anjeline. I appreciate the comment.

[Ted Kniffen]

Dance on, Coyote, you know the steps and the melody...the words are never far behind. A beautiful piece of writing.
I don't know what I'd do without my special love in my life.

A good write, my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ted. I appreciate the comment and I agree. We need our great love

[Stella Armour]

There are always so many loving phrases in each of your poems John; always an image to take away with me .
"I feel the gentleness of concern hands on my face and your sweet words."

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Stella for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Stella Armour]

Thank you John for your lovely words ..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this actually connects for me to my best friend...a different kind of relationship in many ways...
but having her in my life...makes me a stronger and better person...
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

We need our good friends. Thank you Jacob for reading and the comment.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very romantic and sweet piece here Coyote. The picture is also very expressive. Nice, and with Valentine's Day fast approaching, appropriate!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.