I saw the sun in your eyes

Just words

                            I saw the sun in your eyes

You and I,

we are dancing by the Monterey Bay,

I am singing words of love for you.

You asked me, Johnnie, why did you save me?

You were swimming in confusion and you taught me to laugh and to sing again.

I told her, I love your face, I love when your hair is wild and free, I love  when your  hair

is tightly in a bunn. 

I love when you sing lullabies to me in the midnight hours and I love how your mouth moved 

when you talk.

She laughed at my words and she smiled. She told him, you are the sweetest man, you love my 

imperfections. You make me feel worthwhile and care for.

I told her, you bewitched my heart every time I look at your face,

I see the sun in your eyes and you make everyday a wonder and a blessing.

I love your great stories and I love when you whisper poetry to me by the sea.

I love your butterfly kisses and the miracle of your coffee brown eyes.

You made quiet life,

fiery and wonderful,

dangerous and sweet,

you make my days colorful and perfect.

I love you dear lady of the sea.

                          Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Such a beautiful story
and creative imaginary.

this is going
into my favorites.

I love your butterfly kisses and the miracle
of your coffee brown eyes.

You made quiet life,
fiery and wonderful,
dangerous and sweet,
you make my days colorful and perfect.
I love you dear lady of the sea.

[Coyote Poetry]

The sea, good company and time. This is our greatest wealth. Thank you dear Benita for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome my friend
Thank You always for your wonderful
Stories. 👍

[Lyn Anderson]

I like this one alot, a lyrical blend of your story telling style into a tighter format. Just great.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lyn. I appreciate the comment.

[barleygirl]

This is one of your best demonstrations of a man saying exactly what most women would love to hear. Even tho you include great observations, both flaws & strengths of his lady, it flows like nobody was even thinking in such judgmental terms, "good & bad traits" -- Instead the guy sounds like he's just making observations in his natural way & it just happens to be balanced becuz he has inclusive way of seeing people (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Margie. Love showed us. Our number two is our world and our balance.

[Anjeline]

Sweet and beautiful poem. It's truly very nice and brought a smile on my face :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Anjeline. I am glad and I appreciate the kind words.

[Sneh]

This is utterly Beautiful coyote,, very inspiring and spreading love all around! :")
Keep sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Sneh. I appreciate the comment.

[Rye]

You made quiet life,
fiery and wonderful,
dangerous and sweet,
you make my days colorful and perfect.
I love you dear lady of the sea.

I really enjoyed this part, This is so very good.
I like the emotional read a lot. touching

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ryanna. I appreciate your kind words.

[Aurora]

Sweet conservational tale of lovers.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Aurora for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[OneAmongstMany]

Beautifully evocative. As someone who's seen the beauty of Monterey Bay and the Northern Californian coastline first hand, all I can say is: what a place to be in love. Thank you for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. California coastline, a wonderful place to be. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Patricia]

very beautiful, it has so much movement and imagery and yes sincere love. I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing your heart.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Patricia for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[NotUsinganymore]

Very beautiful poem. When you love someone, you love all their imperfections too.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. Love for someone. The imperfections make them perfect. Thank you for reading and the comment.