My great love

Pain of love lost must disappear into the wind.

                    My great love

Do we support to love but once?

Where have my ancient lover's gone?

Chain of passion and spiritual journeys leave
me with kind faces in dreams.

Everlasting smiles so rare they scar my heart and mind.

Are we love victims and the heart must die?

If the bleeding is unable to stop.

I believe we need closure to allow the open wound
to fade to a scar.

I remember trembling and soft hands opening the doors
taking the chill of the cold night away.

Cold Winter and rough weather allow the comfort of
two people to find peace for a time.

I remember the comfort of long nights.
Sweet joy of love dances in early morning.
The smell of skin and twisted hair against me.

My wrath took away the sweet memories and opening
of precious love and emotion.

Now sweet love bade me welcome.
My soul cannot see the beauty that dwells in my
sweet lover's eyes.

I sit upon the sand near the Atlantic ocean.
The sea winds is blowing from east to west.

I pray to the sea to allow my spirit to be able
to run free and be clean again.

The night revealed.
Beautiful auburn hair woman come to me.
Whisper we must live to love.

We must dance with the moon and stars.
Allow the sun to open our heart to a new day and beginning.

We will have many great lovers.
Our life is long and we shall be tested.


                           Coyote

Reviews

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

We must dance with the moon and stars.
Allow the sun to open our heart to a new day and beginning.

We will have many great lovers.
Our life is long and we shall be tested.
pray to the sea to allow my spirit to be able
to run free and be clean again.
How we always yearn for our spirit to be free..and as all the beautifully etched lines of your poems express only love can make it free...unlocking the past and floating in the present merging with it's essence.

[Dom Macchiaroli]

My fave:
"Chain of passion and spiritual journeys leave
me with kind faces in dreams."

You are on a roll my friend. Just really good stuff.

[Rose]

I do enjoy this poem and brings out a interesting story of a man seeking the love off a woman thats decribed like she is just a dream. I don't know if I have that right. Overall your write suprised me I don't think you know how good you are but you are a intellgiant writer

[Elizabeth]

My favorite part: We must dance with the moon and stars.
Allow the sun to open our heart to a new day and beginning.

Beautiful.

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is really awesome adn i love it and you do a really goodo job

[AdrenalineDrug]

I like thisssss:) beautiful!

[Nayan]

Ah! what a great poem!

These lines are so philosophical-
"Are we love victims and the heart must die?"
"I pray to the sea to allow my spirit to be able
to run free and be clean again."

I really loved the way you end the beautiful write...

"We must dance with the moon and stars.
Allow the sun to open our heart to a new day and beginning.

We will have many great lovers.
Our life is long and we shall be tested."

[PoppySilver]

Wonderful hon!
Every time we love, a little of our self is given, or a lot lol
To shed the skin for another love, is no easy task, a little like having nine lives - ignore me if I digress lmao xx

[Randy`s Princess]

very interesting this mean`s to me we live many live`s and have love`s with them it`s great make`s you think :)

[Desert Dreamer]

Beautiful, I love the image of the wind washing us clean to love again, the wind taking our lost loves away so that we can heal. Wonderful poem.

[WorldGoneNutz]

I love to read a peaceful love poem as much as I enjoy
writing them. This is sweet :) Thank you for sharing.
We should all remember to dance with the moon and the stars!