Did I tell you?

Did I tell you?

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
"

A wise person is thankful for what he has.

"



Did I tell you?


I don't remember if I told you how beautiful you are.


I have allowed so many things to blind my eyes.

Allowing disappointment to steal my smile and laughter.


I know.

If you left me.

I would become lost again.


I have twisted up my life in useless dreams.

Victories seem so far away.


Now I know.

You are my  only sweet dream.

That  I  have  gathered in my time of living.


I want to tell you.

I love you more than my own life.


Without you.

I would have no purpose.


Your love for me is a blessing.

A gift to a man so thankful for you.


Thankful for a kind lady  that touched his life.

I love you.



                Coyote


© 2015 Coyote Poetry



Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
We need to be thankful for the people who stay with us in the bad and the good times.

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I think we sometimes take our loved ones for granted and even a daily "I love you, " can become a habit. This is beautiful because it is the why and way more personal than just "I love You," and that is important.
A beautiful write, and she is lucky to have someone who can express it so eloquently. A lot of men cannot and do not, so Kudos!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you. We must show love and concern to our number two. Or lose them.



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we must never forget the fortunes we have, probably someone else misses it
good one

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

Thank you Apoorva. We must appreciate the people who loved us.
We really must be thankful for what we have. Writing is just one of the many ways you can show, and this piece does it's best to show your love. Beautiful meaning and thought behind this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the positive comment. I do appreciate.
I think we sometimes take our loved ones for granted and even a daily "I love you, " can become a habit. This is beautiful because it is the why and way more personal than just "I love You," and that is important.
A beautiful write, and she is lucky to have someone who can express it so eloquently. A lot of men cannot and do not, so Kudos!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you. We must show love and concern to our number two. Or lose them.
This is a simple yet powerful piece. 'Now I know.
You are my only sweet dream.
That I have gathered in my time of living.' I love the way you wrote this. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I appreciate the positive comment.
so true...We need to be thankful for the good times and the bad times then keep around the
people who make you feel good and jettison the ones who make you feel bad.
This is lovely, lovely and lovely some more.

dana



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Dana for reading and the comment. We need people who show us good times and laughter.
I love this one, one of your bests so far.

It is just right to be grateful of the love we receive, so we should let those people know how we thank them for staying in our lives.



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend. One of my older poem.
wow, this is amazing! very beautiful

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you. One of my older poems.
This was the sweetest thing I read today. Bet so many girls would love to hear this from their man. It's simple yet so powerful cause we sometimes need to hear that we're loved. Thank you for sharing. This was a great piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Stephany. I appreciate the comment.
It is true that people go on following pointless dreams and ignore the people who have stayed by their side always. And the poem is subtle yet powerful.
Great work, sir!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Maumil. I appreciate the comment.
I wish the boy who broke up with me would tell me that once again :(

Very beautiful. I love it. The lady you are talking about must be so lucky to have you. Not many men have the courage to say that. Very sweet :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Amy. I appreciate the comment.

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