First love

First love

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Written in 1978. When youth was my advantage.

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 First love

A sweet and beautiful smile opening the door to conversation.
The first taste of the sweet kiss.
Two hands becoming one.
Long walks and talks leading  two people to sweet dreams and wishes.

The feeling of love can't be stop.
When love touches the heart.
Life had reason and purpose.

When my love is near.
I feel alive and strong.
I feel weak and safe at the same time.

All I do is think of my love.
The girl with the beautiful blue eyes and  who love to dance.

Her love torn down years of disappointment.
I feel strong and content.
I need her body near.
To taste her sweet lips day and night.

To swim in her love forever and know peace.

Sweet love, paradise of the warm sun and cold nights.
Allowed two hearts to become one.

I will always love you my beautiful Daniela.

                            Coyote
                             1978


© 2012 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
A old poem. Good to look back to know you were young once.

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Your journeys into the past are so heart warming and tender. Love does strange things to us and without it I believe we are lost souls. Our first loves, so endearing. And you are so right, the feeling of love can not be stopped. Another wonderful poem, and each stanza holds it own merit. thanks for sharing your heart and soul with us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like the take on new love, it's refreshing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

A very old poem. Love is sweet when youth is our advantage. Thank you for reading and the comment.
Beautiful. So many feelings that I can relate to. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your journeys into the past are so heart warming and tender. Love does strange things to us and without it I believe we are lost souls. Our first loves, so endearing. And you are so right, the feeling of love can not be stopped. Another wonderful poem, and each stanza holds it own merit. thanks for sharing your heart and soul with us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'To swim in her love forever and know peace'. Beautifully said. Some grammatical errors but on the whole, a very nice piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"life had reason and purpose" falling in love always does that to us doesn't it?

You were talented even as a young man I see. Great poem as usual Coyote :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The prolog to "Forgive Me" :)
This is a beautiful piece and the feelings and emotions coming from it is pure and real. Not an easy think to get past that 'first love' thing. It latches on to everything.

This was an easy read it flowed so well and Daniela is beautiful just like this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so amazing, describing, and so beautiful!
I loved it!
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is beautiful (: love is a wonderful thing .. such a good author (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww first loves :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet story. I enjoyed the words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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