Snow Flower

Snow Flower

A Poem by Camolo
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Somewhere near the Baltic Sea,2013

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In the desert of the white hell
You yearn and yell
A warm solar ray
But not to pray 
For one more day

The shining of your helid colour
Is the agony of a deadly spring
Turned in to a curse to bring 
Giving back a dark favour

And all the beauty in you
The grace and purity
Will perish and parch you
Will be among the cold carpets
Permafrost is now covering your feet
No more gentle green steps

Shall Melt fast
Will not be the last
Dying in cold
Your petals unfold

© 2017 Camolo


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Beautiful and profound.
Great use of vocab.
The rhyming is good.
"Will perish and parch you
Will be among the cold carpets"
Wonderful expressions.
Well portrayed!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Camolo

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind words

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