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A Poem by Caustic_Dystopia

Nobody really cares if you're broken, 
don't waste your breath on useless words spoken.

The polite concern when you're not the same
Is nothing more than societies game.

Growing apart, moving on 
somebody new for your lying song.

Drowning in a sea of pain
Invisible sorrow pours down like rain.

Screaming silence all around
Nobody cares 'til your in the ground

© 2016 Caustic_Dystopia

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Beautiful connections between lines; I thoroughly enjoy the flow from one line to the next.

Keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago

Keep going, you are the best help you can get.
Nobody will help if you can't even help yourself.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

I see that the message kinda went over your head, not your fault you're not in my head so you couldn.. read more
Lily Evastar

1 Year Ago

I see...
I think feeling depress is a natural, heathly in a way. This help us to respond to o.. read more

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2 Reviews
Added on November 20, 2016
Last Updated on November 20, 2016
Tags: nobody, poetry, Caustic_Dystopia



Redmond, OR

Female, 23 been writing since I was 15. I prefer poetry, but I write short stories, too. Most of my poems are based off true events, or how I was feeling at the time it was written. more..