Snow on a Highway.

Originally written 1.13.2011. The joys of winter.

I love it when I’m on the

highway and the car

in front of me has

not cleaned all the snow

off of their rear bumper.

And the snow falls off in

small clumps

and as it hits the ground

it explodes into countless ice crystals

and those crystals shatter on the black road

and the wind blows the rest away

in a beautiful swirl.

For that second

just that second

its okay

even if it is

just snow on a highway. 

Reviews

[Traxler]

I really like to read this out loud and fast because it sounds like its just part of a conversation and I like its simplicity. Very nice