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Simple Bliss

Simple Bliss

A Poem by Celtic Cat

Simple Bliss

 

Your kiss

Your embrace

Your exquisite, manly face

 

Your heart

Your soul

Your utter being, whole

 

In day

In night

In unabashed delight

 

A joy

A smile

A hand-in-hand walked-mile

 

But what,

Of all this?

You: my simple bliss

 

 


© 2008 Celtic Cat



Author's Note

Celtic Cat
sickening, I know!!

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This beautiful

Posted 6 Years Ago


On the contrary ... a straight-forward showing of the
wonderful emotions you have for this man ...
"Simply" delightful !

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Simple bliss is simply perfect, nothing needs to be added or taken away. Great flow and rhyming sequence.

Posted 7 Years Ago


sooooo sweet my teeth are aching and my toes are curling! Cheers,lea

Posted 9 Years Ago


But I love it anyway .... sounds like something I would write....no insult intended LMAOOOOO. But you are usually not mushy. However, you've done a great job and this is very sweet and I wouldn't change a thing!


Posted 9 Years Ago


Not sickening it is very sweet and loving... nothing wrong with cherishing the one cherishing the one who makes your life complete.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Short and to the point. It's good to see that your out of the despair you were in and you and your man are doing well now. Such poetry is born of good times.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is very very good darling... simple words.. a great message.
one has to learn this towrite... i think emily burns would love it,
when she read this. take care darling, i am still here, but not posting
at the moment.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow, Cat! So well-put!! I'm truly impressed with your ability to string the precise right words together. The emotion and sentiment in this poem are powerful and beautiful at the same time. Well done, cat!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Not sickening...simply stunning!!! Beautifully laid out with timeless content Cat, I loved it. Let me know when it's time to bring out the champers! Love 'the mile walked hand in hand'
Helen:-)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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