For You

For You

A Poem by Celtic Cat
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For a prompt in the Inspiration Think Tank group

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Evil was born from my womb

I birthed it into the world

For you…

 

Fear was suckled from my breast

An enrichment for the being

Of you...

 

Hunger was made from my madness

Imposed starvation to feel the emptiness

For you...

 

Strife I bled out of my heart

A warm blanket of comfort

For you…

 

Wrath spewed forth from my bowels

A divine power of rage

For you…

 

Sickness I belched from my insides

To heal the ugly wellness

Of  you…

 

I gave you my all

My protection, my defenses

For you

To take on the world

 


© 2009 Celtic Cat



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God you are preparing for evil birth ,and nourish,and defend it ...
Wrath spew forth from my bowels
A divine power of rage
For you
you give him all your protection ,defenses to take over the world
My God this is really scary ,is this to happen soon,we better take care and prepair for the worse,very strong fearful writing dear Cat,tell me when this is close to happen...


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i liked this dark writing from the beginning..i would love your son even if he was raised to be evil and to take over the world,you infuse wrath into his veins you nourished him well to take all over the world ..ha ha ..maybe he will be on our side for once,maybe we will enjoy power for once i our life..ha ha.lovely write dear Cat

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A great and dark depiction in metaphor of motherhood and all the hardships that come with it hehe. Love it!

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Reading this I thought you had birthed the devil himself...

"Wrath spew forth from my bowels
A divine power of rage
For you"

Very lucid imagery. Well done.

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Nothing like the love of a good parent... sometimes tough love is the key and sometimes tenderness as you so well pointed out in this fabulous piece... this is exceptional work my friend.

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It sounds like the type of poem a mother would impart to her child and is very awe-inspiring; by

her example, you will inherit life. A good choice of words!

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This poem, brings chills to my spine, I can imagine that this could really happen. Nice write. Oh and thanks for the 3 paws up on ( Peter Rabbit) your comments and friendship are very much appreciated. And I love your picture of Celtic Cat quite adorable.

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A great nailing down of malevolence. Sounds like the imp-in-chief himself briefing his colonels. Strong poem. Simple and chilling.

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wow. for the simplicity of the words and the elegant minimalism - this thing packs a WHOLLOP! it gives me shudders in places I didn't know were still attached to my body. Riveting, chilling poetry. A surreal, stalkerish feel to it. Or maybe I have just missed the crap out of your writing style. peace.

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I am the hardest person around to freak out. I don't believe in ghosts, the living dead, or the hundreds of other mystical evils, BUT, this piece was sorta chilling. So, I would say it was an excellent write. :) Rain..

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Pretty wonderful stuff Cat ;)
~Raven

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