I'm writing poetry

I'm writing poetry

A Poem by Celtic Cat
"

just now, here...I'm happy

"

lying in our bed
flying in my head
thoughts circle
round n round

Lost n found
Underground
I’ve been browned
and battered

Do excuse
tend to amuse
it’s a trait
they say
I think

it’s all within
reach within reach
become the matter
you matter

“Whatcha doin’, baby?” he asks.
“P-p-p-poetry” she stumbled.  “I’m writing poetry”
 


© 2008 Celtic Cat



Author's Note

Celtic Cat
for reals, tell me to remove it if it's shite

Picture copyright celticcat 2008

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I like the hesitancy with which she answers; any poet worth salt feels humbled by the craft but beauty, for the most part, is truly in the eye of the beholder. Different strokes for different folks. We simply grasp at those spinning thoughts like motes of dust in morning sunshine and try to realize them onto the paper or the computer screen. This held a relative theme for me; aspiring to my worth as a poet in the judgment of others.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I think this is witty... the power of poetry is under appreciated these days and when inspired you can't stop writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the hesitancy with which she answers; any poet worth salt feels humbled by the craft but beauty, for the most part, is truly in the eye of the beholder. Different strokes for different folks. We simply grasp at those spinning thoughts like motes of dust in morning sunshine and try to realize them onto the paper or the computer screen. This held a relative theme for me; aspiring to my worth as a poet in the judgment of others.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

haha no this is not s**t, it's actually pretty good. poetry really gets you thinking!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's not shite hon. there is such a simplistic beauty to be found here. perhaps it is that there is just that simple question of what you are doing which brings to mind for me a certain care, a certain together thing. perhaps it is that stutter with the reply that says there is a certain fear in the sharing, but you feel safe there. it is a moment in a day in a life and it is golden

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not at all! I enjoyed this thoroughly!

I look forward to reading more soon!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Truthfully, I liked this piece. It was cute and I enjoyed reading it. I think that you should keep it for others to read. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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