A Bit Closer To Heaven

I wrote this is 5 minutes just before i go out to my lunch in office..

Kneeled on the ground
with Arms Wide Open
Aiming to the heavens
prayed through the night
thinking heftily
with my devoided mind
danced in the rain
like a mad man with pain..

the waiting is over
my screaming was deeper
dear god heard my prayer
  divine presence is near
an angel is here
to wash away my fears
longing and holding her
im a bit closer to heaven!

 <Chamil>

Reviews

[Chamil3001]

thank you imagination 101

[imagination101]

Oh my this was a very touching, powerful poem! I loved it!