Speechless Hearts

Deep within the ways I love you

lies a valley, 

where my wandering footsteps 

find no boundaries.

Hands held in hands

Drift amongst the pearls

Silent in emotion

I know you are mine

You are not my world, 

Am I yours?

Speechless be our hearts

Same sun, different moons.

The air we breathe 

Tasting of honeysuckle

Embedded on a memory

On a lifetime of love

A collaboration by Neva Flores and Aidz Giannini

Author's Note

A collaboration by Aidz Giannini and Neva Flores

Artist *Tony Chow

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Neva love, this collaboration of Gianni and you is marvelous... it reaches deeper than many writes, and feelings, the way you two are dwelled in perfection, I learn much from.
I guess this one is pure....

"You're not my world, Am I yours" good profound questions, as I as a free mind always believe in freedom, not owning. This reached my core, and to both of you my best wishes! hugs xo Exceptional writing.

E.L.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Sweet Sister, he has been a wonderful mentor and is very easy to write with. He seems to see right through all of my BS and calls me on it. A trait I admire in men brave enough to do it to me. LOL!

Yes, I do love men who have this sixth sense too. They are needed in this bad world now days, for we can get lost.... I'm grateful to be here, Neva, as I will be more in main time... I've so missed you and your writings, as I will check Aidz out too! I have a lot to catch up with :-)

* I am sorry for misspelled his name, Giannini.... in Italian plurals for Gianni.... (John in English). I'm too Italian I overlooked lol

[Aidz]

Yes Giannini is last name first name Adriano shhhh ;)

:-D

[Veronica Chandler]

A collaboration of two divine spirits for this piece touches heaven and brings me to the gates to glimpse within.
Stunningly, beautifully done

[Danielle]

Such graceful powerful words here...lovely work!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Shia :)

[Emerald Seas]

A fabulous collaboration. You've captured the essence of a true love (IMHO) - unconditional, free, without ownership - just allowing it "to be"
Congratulations on a winning combination of talent.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Que Sera Sera :)

[krish]

WOW...THIS POEM I THINK NICE......

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Shivam :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful painting and a amazing poem of love. Thank you both for sharing the outstanding poem of love.
Coyote

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Coyote, I enjoy writing with Aidz. :)

[Keith]

This is a nicotine romantic piece. Its simple lines hint and guide wonderfully to the deep love held by the lover within this scene. Well done.

A perfect choice of artwork.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Wes

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a beautiful piece. Love in those quiet moments speak louder than love confessed to the world. This flows smoothly and slowly. I like the pace and the feel in this piece.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Poetic :)

[Antonio Valentino]

hey that was absolutely sensational, what a great job you both did i loved it in ever way, you two should consider doing more pieces together the flow and feeling was seamless.. wonderfully done.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you Antonio, over the years I have written more with Aidz than anyone else. He is a great mentor and writer.

[Antonio Valentino]

that is so awesome, kudos again to both of you! :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

And a beautiful collaboration it is. Love, the mystery we seek, sometimes find and one we adore to behold. Great work Neva and Aidz. A wonderful poem.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you Becky :)