Harmony Breathes In

Harmony Breathes In

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I see your heartbeat in every man and I can hear your mind even though you hide behind the sun.

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I see your heartbeat in every man

and I can hear your mind

even though you hide

behind the sun.

You disappear

into places of mystery

where you survive

inside your fun.


You see yourself

as the lost make believe

and leave no room for reality

to ever be the same.

All those bridges you are burning

have you drowning

inside of your

own shame.


You want to vanish

into a spiraling truth

and be heard

by your feelings

while reaching out.

There is no such thing as honor

when sitting on a velvet seat

where you only shout.


Your tears will soon pass

when you think

of the anticipation

of the dreams you had

in your cradle.

Harmony breathes in a quiet breath

lasts forever

if it is able.



© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
*Artist Santiago Caruso

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The price we have to pay for being inconsiderate and downright mean to those who love us, but get no love in return, is loneliness and friendless in the end. To be so selfish as to think they are superior in a love affair is a shame. Those who take pleasure in hurting others is a sub-human and not worthy of a second glance. The only thing is they hide that side of them until the hook have been swallowed before showing their true selves. Good poetry.

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Beautiful work,Neva. I love the imagery and the subtly of how your words flow off the page :)

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Thank you Cord :)
Wow, you are one VERY talented lady, I adore your work! I love the imagery in this piece. It was written beautifully. You have some talent when it comes to writing, you keep us hooked throughout the poem and tell us a little story, its amazing! I love it!

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Noodlehead :)
s y e

4 Years Ago

Anytime hun :-)
this is very deep, the harmony at the end was a beautiful finish to the pain and agony you had laced into the words at the start, great job:)

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Thank you Marie :)
marie

4 Years Ago

no problem:)
I love the image you choose to accompany the music of your words , such elegance in your poetry .

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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thank you Robin :)
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Pax
your brought up a touching meaningful write... always so nice to read your verses....
thanks for sharing a great work my friend...

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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thank you Pax :)
good poem........

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

thank you wp
A masterpiece again. I love the way you've penned this. So true.

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Mehak :)
Your words are always so beautiful and meaningful

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Iona :)
Oh my, the harmony and rhythm in this is phenomenal. The last stanza really stuck the landing for me- it's perfect. It reminds me of the poems I read of writers past, when I think I could never be that way with words. So smooth!
Nice work, as always.

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

thank you hayley :)
I like your contemplative, philosphical stance, beautiful writing

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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thank you sheema :)

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