When Night Stands on the Waters

When Night Stands on the Waters

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Rub your feelings all over me..........

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Exhale your emotions
onto all of our memories
waxing as poetic candles,
rub your feelings all over me.
While vague unexpected hours
root deeply
and mingle inside all they see.

I can hear our laughter lingering
when night stands on the waters
of our love,
never growing tired or flickering.
Following close behind
the heels of my heart
never leaving..........
or wandering.

We have been given a life
that comes after midnight,
guiding us,
letting no poison command our faith.
I smile,
in knowing our love
will grow stronger,
as each day passes away.

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist *Marcobusoni

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One is taken into the heart and mind of the narrator and kept there by use of visual images that 'talk' to the reader. Talk is not the correct expression, probably better to say the poem whispers to us as it takes to a memory and embellishes it.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Cartera :)



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If only! ...... *my thoughts* Very beautiful Neva, your poetry always takes me away

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love the scene you have painted with your words and I love the feel you've put in your words.
ITS AWSOME!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so awesome. I love.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful breathtaking words!
100/100

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you ! :)
Quite beautiful. :-) I loved the way you expressed this part:
"I can hear our laughter lingering
when night stands on the waters
of our love,
never growing tired or flickering."

Posted 4 Years Ago


How is it that every poem you put out deserves a standing ovation for describing love so beautifully? :) Great job with this poem, I think its literally impossible for you to write a poem that isn't wonderful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


As to be expected, always visceral and real your writing belies your feelings even if the words are not so defitionistic (yes I just made this word up)


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Eric, I like your word :)
"We have been given a life
that comes after midnight"
Nice. I have a lot to say but can't find all the words. I am moved by your poem, I think that it is beautiful. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Morgan :)
Love how exceptionally you have twined the words!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Anxia :)
"Waxing as poetic candles"

Great. Bravo... Bravo...

Perfect Line-

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you POL :)

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