When Night Stands on the Waters

When Night Stands on the Waters

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Rub your feelings all over me..........

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Exhale your emotions
onto all of our memories
waxing as poetic candles,
rub your feelings all over me.
While vague unexpected hours
root deeply
and mingle inside all they see.

I can hear our laughter lingering
when night stands on the waters
of our love,
never growing tired or flickering.
Following close behind
the heels of my heart
never leaving..........
or wandering.

We have been given a life
that comes after midnight,
guiding us,
letting no poison command our faith.
I smile,
in knowing our love
will grow stronger,
as each day passes away.

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist *Marcobusoni

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One is taken into the heart and mind of the narrator and kept there by use of visual images that 'talk' to the reader. Talk is not the correct expression, probably better to say the poem whispers to us as it takes to a memory and embellishes it.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Cartera :)



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A most excellent love poem. The words gently roll off the tongue and enter the heart of the reader. Love it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


you have reinforced the experience of love in such a magical way, it felt really glorious absorb this poem

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Sheema :)
Romantic write as usaul , sounds so wonderful and graceful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Moon :)
What a wonderful poem... obviously written with a special love in mind...I'm green with envy. Oh, I admire the poem, your talents and skill with words but I'm much more envious of the feeling that brought these words from your heart and pen. Excellent writing and I wish you all the love and happiness so deserved by such a wonderful and gracious lady.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

You are right, a new love......I am happy. Thank you Fabian :)
"...As each day passes away"... Like the Death card. Shedding must occur to allow room for new growth. Xo. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

thank you Mel :) xooxo
Lovely work Neva... as always! xo

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Joe xoxo
Very beautiful. :)

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Mark :J)
Amazing painting up there followed by an equally amazing piece of poetry.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Mehak :)
One is taken into the heart and mind of the narrator and kept there by use of visual images that 'talk' to the reader. Talk is not the correct expression, probably better to say the poem whispers to us as it takes to a memory and embellishes it.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Cartera :)
The hours we could spend dissecting your work in my literature class, there's so much to say. So much passion goes into your work, it's incredible. The imagery, the emotion, it's all so powerful. I fall in love with your words every time I read them.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

thank you so much Iona :)

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