When Night Stands on the Waters

When Night Stands on the Waters

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Rub your feelings all over me..........

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Exhale your emotions
onto all of our memories
waxing as poetic candles,
rub your feelings all over me.
While vague unexpected hours
root deeply
and mingle inside all they see.

I can hear our laughter lingering
when night stands on the waters
of our love,
never growing tired or flickering.
Following close behind
the heels of my heart
never leaving..........
or wandering.

We have been given a life
that comes after midnight,
guiding us,
letting no poison command our faith.
I smile,
in knowing our love
will grow stronger,
as each day passes away.

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist *Marcobusoni

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One is taken into the heart and mind of the narrator and kept there by use of visual images that 'talk' to the reader. Talk is not the correct expression, probably better to say the poem whispers to us as it takes to a memory and embellishes it.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Cartera :)



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This lovely thought wraps me warmly and softly with its easy and tender words. Well done, Neva.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Michael :)
Tis said love wears different faces .. yours here has to be the most passionately beautiful. Tried to find the phrase that magics me, but there isn't one, tis all or nothing. Wonderful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Emma :)
I love this its so romantic and nocturnal two of my favorite things. :) I like how strong the love and the conviction to the love is.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Whitehawk :)
You always come up with the goods, just how you do it, i dont know,
but its special...



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Yas!
Beautiful work!

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Jeff :)
The poem is so beautiful :) The scheme and the words together being out just Perfect Beauty :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Pragya :)
this is lovely in every way... I like the subtle rhyming of it.. the content is affectionate, passionate and sweet... and I loved this part in particular:

Following close behind
the heels of my heart
never leaving..........
or wandering.

Nice Work :))

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you B. :)
Neva my love, as you well know I've been an avid reader of your work and a fan for about two years now. I have to say, that this piece above all others made me feel . . . . more. It's hard to explain, one tends to become immune to others words at times, you see a great piece amoung an ocean of great piece and you response is the same. It takes work like this one to slap you as a reader about the face and sit to realise that there are poets out there, such as you, that still have the great talent or gift is you will to wake the jaded reader such as myself - my darling, your a true talent, well done, good read. x

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Thomas :)
As usual what a beautiful poem. Never disappointed in your writing, always keep writing i love this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Zach :)

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