When Night Stands on the Waters

When Night Stands on the Waters

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Rub your feelings all over me..........

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Exhale your emotions
onto all of our memories
waxing as poetic candles,
rub your feelings all over me.
While vague unexpected hours
root deeply
and mingle inside all they see.

I can hear our laughter lingering
when night stands on the waters
of our love,
never growing tired or flickering.
Following close behind
the heels of my heart
never leaving..........
or wandering.

We have been given a life
that comes after midnight,
guiding us,
letting no poison command our faith.
I smile,
in knowing our love
will grow stronger,
as each day passes away.

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist *Marcobusoni

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One is taken into the heart and mind of the narrator and kept there by use of visual images that 'talk' to the reader. Talk is not the correct expression, probably better to say the poem whispers to us as it takes to a memory and embellishes it.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Cartera :)



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What a beautiful painting! I do love a good picture of a mermaid...
I love the idea of rubbing feelings. Your poetry is always full of depth and beauty. It's very filling coming here.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Siren :)
Wow, this was a stunning piece. I loved it, a very beautiful write and an absolute pleasure to read. The picture is amazing. Very well done as always!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you N. :)
s y e

4 Years Ago

Anytime :-)
"I can hear our laughter lingering
when night stands on the waters
of our love,"
When I read you pieces as if I'm being transported to another realm of love and beauty. You possess a magical and serene soul that want to touch the Divine and touch us with spiritual candles...A great write...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Sami :)
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

My pleasure...Ant time...:)
Oh nevee yours is the immortal loving god of the New Testament you have such a sweet tooth

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

you always make me laugh, thanks Tate :)
Stunning!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

thank you Marc :)
Marc Marlon Villaflor

4 Years Ago

Welcome :)
A captivatingly romantic poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
i like the entire poem...but "rub your feelings all over me"
i can't get past that line...

i just want to keep going back to it...that is like a one line poem all by itself.


so much imagery inferred in six words. there is something about nighttime, after midnight..the bewitching hour..and that hour when passion rises to meet the dawn sooner or later.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

thank you so much Erin :)
You always make my eyes tear with your words, I feel the emotion in your poetry and alow it to carry me with the flow of your words. It is truly a gift you have to pull your readers in and to make them think. You carefully play the heart strings like a fine violin putting to shame all the great composers. You are truly gifted.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you JM :) XX
This is a stunning tale of that real love that is endless. Flickering like a forever candle. The descriptions are amazing. You always add such beautiful nature qualities to your poetry which give the pieces a calm flowing feel.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Poetic :)
Poetic Beauty

4 Years Ago

you are more than welcome. I love how you paint images with your words.
Such beauty in the movement forward ... as each day passes away:) xo Your work is always genuine and from the heart..xo

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

thank you my sweet friend xoooo

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