When Night Stands on the Waters

When Night Stands on the Waters

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Rub your feelings all over me..........

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Exhale your emotions
onto all of our memories
waxing as poetic candles,
rub your feelings all over me.
While vague unexpected hours
root deeply
and mingle inside all they see.

I can hear our laughter lingering
when night stands on the waters
of our love,
never growing tired or flickering.
Following close behind
the heels of my heart
never leaving..........
or wandering.

We have been given a life
that comes after midnight,
guiding us,
letting no poison command our faith.
I smile,
in knowing our love
will grow stronger,
as each day passes away.

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist *Marcobusoni

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One is taken into the heart and mind of the narrator and kept there by use of visual images that 'talk' to the reader. Talk is not the correct expression, probably better to say the poem whispers to us as it takes to a memory and embellishes it.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Cartera :)



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Lovely, Neva. I haven't seen a new work from you in a while (probably due to my absence). A wonderful read, as is your usual of course.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

thank you, good to see you too.
Beautiful poem as always Neva. I know I have been gone for a long time but I have been trying to get some things together on my side. Like always your poems capture me. "We have been given a life
that comes after midnight," that was my favorite line in the poem. You never disappoint and I am always glad to read your work. Well done

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

thank you Layla :)
@frieda p.--yes Neva I love that line..it goes in my "Well turned Phrases" document for Musings. Laury

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you EM :)
Wow, I could drown in this one and die happy Neva.... loveliness personified here.

'letting no poison command our faith'

Holy that's money right there, if only. *sigh*

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda and you are so right :)
A beautiful poem. Artwork and description was amazing. You create good places and visions with strong description. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote :)
nice theme;;;;;;;;and the waters of love, a strange theme.....and your hope by the end!! well penned

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

thank you within :)
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Pax
how beautiful your poetry always have... a memory that love grows stronger...
great work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Pax :)
Simply beautiful and mesmerizing sweet Neva. This poem reaches out and touches my heart in a soft and caressing way. Love does gives of life, does it not and without it breath is so very hard to find. Lovely.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

yes it does Jack, thank you my friend. :)
Love this. A strong piece about love and faith and how nothing can triumph over it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

4 Years Ago

Thank you Ken, good to see you :)

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