My Heart Bleeds in Every Shade of You

My Heart Bleeds in Every Shade of You

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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I hear my fate

surrounding your every touch

and my heart bleeds

in every shade of you.

Because of you,

the colors of my life

have become

a golden sea of happiness,

your sweet love........

breathes into.


You fulfill every dream

that has ever exhaled

into the deepest parts

of my heart.

Dearest,

my soul runs to you whispering,

I have arrived

with no end to my trust,

from your side..........

I will not part”.





© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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Your words are so lovely they take my breath away! The title sets the tone for the poem and you carry it through with a golden sea of happiness as your soul runs whispering........I hush my sounds and hear your devotion and love shouting 'cross the sea of love!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very deep emotions flow through your words,beautifully expressed;-]

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful! I once was here, *sighs* not for long but endured all the same.. Written so nicely

Posted 2 Years Ago


A beautiful piece of work! I feel the emotions.
100/100

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its very deep and dark like the colour of the night sky...ITS WONDERFUL!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reminds me if my style... It's very deep.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You paint a beautiful picture here...this piece is wistful and sweet. I loved it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful interesting love piece.....

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An expressive write, with some interesting imagery.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words are so lovely they take my breath away! The title sets the tone for the poem and you carry it through with a golden sea of happiness as your soul runs whispering........I hush my sounds and hear your devotion and love shouting 'cross the sea of love!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could have stopped at the title and I would have been content...
Whenever I feel like reading great poetry Neva...I know I can turn to you...
I trust I will always be rewarded....and I am
Another in a line of great writes
allen


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 4, 2013
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Tags: love, romance

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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