My Heart Bleeds in Every Shade of You

My Heart Bleeds in Every Shade of You

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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I hear my fate

surrounding your every touch

and my heart bleeds

in every shade of you.

Because of you,

the colors of my life

have become

a golden sea of happiness,

your sweet love........

breathes into.


You fulfill every dream

that has ever exhaled

into the deepest parts

of my heart.

Dearest,

my soul runs to you whispering,

I have arrived

with no end to my trust,

from your side..........

I will not part”.





© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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Your words are so lovely they take my breath away! The title sets the tone for the poem and you carry it through with a golden sea of happiness as your soul runs whispering........I hush my sounds and hear your devotion and love shouting 'cross the sea of love!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Very deep, and full of lvoe.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Stunning, just stunning. I love it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Your title for this poem is absolute magic - or is it absolute and magical sincerity. The words from start to finish are heart.romping beauty. Won't say more, can't .. caught in your poetic bubble.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Love it. I am trying to think of the right words, but all I can come up with is beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful as usual full of love and promise.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Oh Neva, I absolutely love this write! Every bit! Every word! To bleed in every shade of someone emotes and is indicative of energy, vibration, sound, and spirituality. How truly wonderful! I love it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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"...my soul runs to you whispering,
I have arrived..."
So very beautiful, Neva. And the picture you posted with this is ooh-la-la. Thank you for sharing:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


A beautiful and hopeful poem. I could feel the desire in the words. Good to find joy and happiness in another. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


I felt both moved and slightly sad about how the real sense of togetherness is so invaluable ( yet is forgotten when couples drift apart and /or the relationship ends acrimoniously....this usually means that at least one partner has completely forgotten how they used to feel during intimacy as a loving couple, and if one partner has responded to the break up very badly, it is probably because they still remember what, really special tenderness between them, really meant ), you have captured the experience perfectly....lovely work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


How beautiful! Made me smile...your work always did and will xx

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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