My Heart Bleeds in Every Shade of You

My Heart Bleeds in Every Shade of You

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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I hear my fate

surrounding your every touch

and my heart bleeds

in every shade of you.

Because of you,

the colors of my life

have become

a golden sea of happiness,

your sweet love........

breathes into.

You fulfill every dream

that has ever exhaled

into the deepest parts

of my heart.


my soul runs to you whispering,

I have arrived

with no end to my trust,

from your side..........

I will not part”.

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Your words are so lovely they take my breath away! The title sets the tone for the poem and you carry it through with a golden sea of happiness as your soul runs whispering........I hush my sounds and hear your devotion and love shouting 'cross the sea of love!!

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Very beautiful Neva! Lovely write from a lovely lady. Glad to see you come around once in awhile. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago

no end to my trust. That is how love should be. This is such a beautiful write.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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This is a very magnificent piece. Thank you for your review.


Posted 4 Years Ago

Beautiful Neva, Charming and romantic, love lives within these words.

Posted 4 Years Ago

I am speechless Neva. absolutely beautiful..

Posted 4 Years Ago

Breathtakingly lovely Neva.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Very very nice. I loved every bit of this poem, you have done it excellently and managed to keep your readers engrossed, the ending of it. I can not say more. Good one

Posted 4 Years Ago

Stunning and beautiful. Outstanding

Posted 4 Years Ago

A passionate take on what love can be, beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Added on August 4, 2013
Last Updated on August 4, 2013
Tags: love, romance


Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..


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