Repaired With Gold

Repaired With Gold

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Does one become more beautiful after being broken?

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Does one become more beautiful

after being broken?

Could they be repaired with gold

until their heart and mind

are no longer numb?

Will the harsh voices

that caused each crack

disappear............

into a billion pieces

as if never spoken?

If so,

please paint each crack in my heart

and stop.......

where this pain flows from.






© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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i love the last three lines Neva...

and yes, i think broken can be beautiful...vulnerable meets vulnerable and together they show great power...

we learn from our mistakes...we grow, we become better people...but i don't think gold will do it...love might...but gold will only be a temporary fix.

lots of guts in this poem, Neva.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Gold can only repair gold. We are something much more, so much more.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I like questions in a poem and this raises some good ones. A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing with us...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love the last three lines Neva...

and yes, i think broken can be beautiful...vulnerable meets vulnerable and together they show great power...

we learn from our mistakes...we grow, we become better people...but i don't think gold will do it...love might...but gold will only be a temporary fix.

lots of guts in this poem, Neva.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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