Your Hands

Sighs of great bliss emanate from all of my senses
At the very sight of your hands
Sweet murmurs of memories evoked in a passion
Mesmerizing in haunting command

I am quieted of motion, stopped in existent time
Thrilled to my core of being
With memories of spaces and faraway places
Your hands take my spirit a fleeing

Strength emits from the coursing of lifeblood
Pulsing within your clasp
Holding my heart in suspended anticipation
Inviting the fire of your grasp

My attention is gravitated by the fire in your eyes
A flame, perhaps I could withstand
If not for the murmurs of sweet memories evoked
When my eyes are caressing your hands

Reviews

[brenda]

My attention is gravitated by the fire in your eyes
A flame, perhaps I could withstand
If not for the murmurs of sweet memories evoked
When my eyes are caressing your hands


i love this lines they are so good and describes passion and love it just so sweet !!:)

[WatashLegend]

stunning in all of its elegance, the eyes, the observers of recollection, the bringer up of what we thought was forgotten, beautiful.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A great write that captures what I believe about. That is that some little thing that to others is meaningless, is much much more. In this case for you it is the sight of his hands.

Excellent indeed:)

[Tate Morgan]

your prolific pen never runs dry

[WordNerd]

This poem is genius!!!

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I can tell this one has some depth to it, It's very feeling and moving.
Such emotions tug at the heart. Lovely written Neva.

[alan peter kelly]

this poem pulsates with passion....there is substance to its every line and...holistically entwined...it speaks to me from a place which lights my own knowing...

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes....very vivid.
emotion in motion.

[Rene Velez]

very nice, I've read a few of your poems but never commented because poets can be picky at who they want to comment on them, and so i usually wait for a read request, like i said before very nice poem, you have a grace and finesse with your construction that allows your poems to flow so effortlessly and that's not easy to do, it's beautiful and endearing.

[Christian Adriaensen]

Poems like these make me feel humble about my own writings.

Beautiful, very passionate.

[☯]

A very compelling and heartfelt poem. The wonders you can even write about someone's hands, and the beauty you can stitch into it. An amazing and unique plotted poem. Amazing write :)