Fill My Soul Delighted

Fill My Soul Delighted

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Dearest desire, light of my darkness, fill my soul delighted..........

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Better than purposely it seems attracting

All that filled my soul delighted
Before you danced in tracks of beauty
Our hearts were not meant to be divided

In sleep itself we are great trees of splendor
Silver hands that wake to see
Flowers bring what is born unto flame
Rest on laurels of you and me

If this comes from butterflies of time
To softly rest upon our lips
Should we not place your hand in mine
And round this cup both sip

I find that I am empty but I must endure
Pass this test of time
Until my streams are filled once again
Your heart is tied to mine

Dearest desire, light of my darkness
Fill my soul delighted
Come and sip this cup with me…’tis full
When we are not divided

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Neva, This was just exquisite, but then again everything you write is. But one speaks volumes upon volumes. " Dearest desire, light of my darkness fill my soul delighted. Come and sip this cup with me...tis full, When we are not divided" These words can speak to everyone in a different way depending on how they want to interpet it. Love it, it is a favorite. xo

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droplets of emotion fall from this piece and connect in the pool of love, inviting, pleasant and wonderful may the cup never become empty.

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"Dearest desire, light of my darkness
Fill my soul delighted
Come and sip this cup with me…’tis full
When we are not divided"

You speak volumes with your sweet syllables, good write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A compelling and neatly tied poem. The connection between the two figures in the poem is strong and incapable of breaking so.
"Flowers bring what is born unto flame
Rest on laurels of you and me"
An amazingly described and written piece. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Impressive, loved the feeling I got from reading this piece.

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This is simply marvellous, I like this one so much, it touched me in a way.
I found this moving and sincere. Love the picture you used.

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Auld Lang Syne
Heart rent tears for thee
Wear laurel wreath within
Heart longing
Silver gong
Sing love song
Sip again in sleep united
Nectar from thy womb

Posted 12 Years Ago


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beauty sings in the rhythm and rhyme of this

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neva, you have a divine way of writing...feelings,emotions flow out of your words...which makes you unique in your own way!

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"Dearest desire, light of my darkness
Fill my soul delighted
Come and sip this cup with me…’tis full
When we are not divided"
This makes me thirsty for the desire shared by two.. :) Great write Neva...xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Beautifully written. This is such a wrote of passage!

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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