Dream Weaver - A Collage of One Man's Poetry

Dream Weaver - A Collage of One Man's Poetry

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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A collage of the works of Dream Weaver as interpreted by me - Changefulstorm

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I have given all the best of me
Time for you to create your own vision
It’s all for one and one for all to be

I am poignant, weak and weary
Still love has been a confiding stranger
Who twists and taunts effortlessly

Smiling backwards in these winds
I’m watching buffalo herds softly graze
As the world watches me begin

I have seen an unconditional love
Cut jagged shards that made me bleed
Tossed in sorrow and pain thereof

Come and whisper secrets to me
Faceless, in your stillness you are bold
Yet still a majestic sheen I see

I meander in freely from the East
Escalating woe and desperately divided
Unbutton your soul, for my feast

Constantly racing thoughts collide
Swirling in a disheveled hue of betrayal
Grasping with hands which hide

I can see the warmth of magnificence
In the languid pools of your lovely eyes
Forever they will hold significance

Yet continuously through monotony
Flesh is being stripped down to the bone
Frustration is in the rainbow I see

Just a drop of relief I pose for in thirst
Some precise analytical picture of inspiration
Listening for deaf ears to be reversed

Corporeal delights among desiccated tears
Lie hidden in a loneliness obscured and rejected
Still walk like a man, sing with no fear

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
A collage I created from interpreting and using many of the words of Dream Weaver's poetry. He can be found here: http://www.writerscafe.org/Once%20Bitten

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This travels time with soft blinks.I could feel that search for those glimpses that make it all worth while. Your poem was a glimpse for me, it revives my enthusiasm. Pieces like this are a priviledge to read and as the reader... the receiver of those precious rewards. Thankyou you are very talented.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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That's pretty cool, something I've never thought of doing. I like the idea and the resulting piece...!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am a fickle fan...Last night I fell in love with one of your mushiest of mushy love poems, and thought it may be one of my favorites and now I have fallen for this beautiful piece.
Just wait till I get to the next one I will fall in love all over again and choose a new favorite. I am on my way to read some dream weaver to read your inspiration.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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"Still walk like a man, sing with no fear."
I really enjoyed reading this poem. You absolutely wove a dream into my mind. The descriptions and images you've created in my mind kept me thirsty for more. It''s interesting to read, it's like a horrific sweet desire. Another amazing piece. You've captured my mind. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice....Such a wonderful tribute.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

...Interesting collection to say the least

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes I still walk like a man without any fear or favour, Well done neva/

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are responsible for a lot of my confusion hahah.

"Unbutton your soul"-I have not seen something so simple yet so powerful at the same time.

Great tribute to the work of another. I know this is going to my favorites not just simply to muse over the true meaning and emotions of the poem, but so that I may also learn to write pieces of such great magnitude, like this piece. Like you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's quite an accolade to interpret and then recreate something from another writer's work Neva and without having read the Dream Weaver I am sure he would be delighted with the result of your efforts.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This Dream Veawer sounds interesting and you have written a lovely poem compilation in a collage!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like a man who has walked the Earth from start to now, who has seen what no one person can dream of, weaved together in words so beautiful I wouldn't be surprised if from the youth pen they had been bleed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 14, 2011
Last Updated on December 15, 2011
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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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