Spirit of A Thousand Winds

Spirit of A Thousand Winds

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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my fingertips trace one hundred places on your face.............

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I thought I had told you, I have never
loved someone like this,
or felt the touch of a spirit
 like a thousand winds
 wrap around my moments in this way.

 Look me in the eye and taste the passion
 of this wine that pours from my heart.
 You will then know the chemistry
that makes up the rhythm of truth
 in these words I speak to you.

 Listen to how much easier the rain falls
 because we hear calmer waters
when we sail on the river
of our sweetest emotions.    

I thought you knew how I dream
of drawing the curtains of love’s intoxication
 across our windows
and calling off our search for different skies.
 I was sure you understood
 how my fingertips trace one hundred places
 on your face that I love more each time
 I seek them out with my eyes.  

I thought I had told you,
I have never loved someone like this,
but perhaps I merely spoke these words in my mind.
 So I tell you now, I speak them aloud,
 to let there be no questions
 running in the meadow of everything we feel.
 I have never loved anyone
as I love you.  

Take my hand
and let’s draw the curtains
 of love’s intoxication across our windows.
  Let us shut out the world
 and sail on the river of our sweetest emotions.
 I will trace those places on your face
 that I adore with all I am.
 Come wrap me in your spirit
 of a thousand winds.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist - Ekaterina Zagustina (Katja Faith)

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The title alone caught my attention...
My so much to say about this, and all I can say is, I am in awe...such beauty pours from the soul...magnificent! Outstanding and going to my favs!!!
Poetry that takes your breath away...Neva that is your writing!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Stunning work...xx

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is soulful love and the title a wonderful canvas.
I felt every emotion of that overwhelming feeling that captures ones heart.
LOVE ....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i once upon a time had a love like this...we cud speak without words just with our eyes....great emotions pouring thru your poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

First let me say I agree with VR regarding the title. This is luxurious! A finely woven tapestry you mantle and display for us with your writing. Definitely one of my favorites! Your work inspires me to keep reaching myself. Thanks.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The picture best explained when you wrote:
or felt the touch of a spirit
like a thousand winds
wrap around my moments in this way.

Just Awesome!
Gorgeous!


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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felt the touch of a spirit
like a thousand winds
Love those to lines
This was another beautiful piece Neva, This is just simply stunning and it is like a river filled with such passionate words.
The ending was superb

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem my Poet friend. The words were kind and brought forward a sweet wish.
"So I tell you now, I speak them aloud,
to let there be no questions
running in the meadow of everything we feel.
I have never loved anyone
as I love you. "
When love overtake us. Need to whisper your happiness into the thousand winds. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This flowed with such grace and elegance..
Phenomenal wording dreamlike precision all
around a wonderful write Neva...

Posted 6 Years Ago


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EMF
BEAUTY DOES NOT SOME IT UP. NIETHER DOES PERFECTION. I WRITE WITH A LUMP IN MY THORAT AND YOUR WORDS RINGING IN MY EARS. IF THEY GET BETTER THAN YOU, NEVER MET THEM.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are like night and day extremely happy or deeply sorrowed So nice to see you are extremely happy now!It rings like the bell of the old town steeple clear and true for all to hear.Love is the language of your soul!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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